SuperHero - Comments

LOVE IT!!

You are a natural born writer! Your writing is so perfect and original. I'm jealous lol, but don't worry I love your story. I'll be sure to be reading the rest of the chapters. I'm barely on chapter 2. Anyway love it. I hope one day you take your writing to the next level, by publishing a book. Cause honestly I would so buy any book you write.

"God damn" so very very Elena lol

If I was Elena, I would've squeaked too xD! Oh my gosh, he's finally unmasked :3! And I'm guessing he's pretty sexy, eh ;)? Hahaha.

I wonder what other amazing events you'll be adding into the story. I would not be able to conjure up anything in my head xD. But, you seem to be doing a great job in yours, aha.

Update when you can! <3

First of all i absolutely love your graphics they are amazing!!! the video was cool too!! anyway moving on.... Love the chapter, and i love Hero and Elena together (hint,hint) lol u rock so keep on writing..... thats all :D

I've just started reading and I'm in LOVE with this story!!!!

please update soon!!!!

Chapter 12: OMG please post a picture of Hero in the next chapter or something....I've gotta see what he looks like. And it seems Hero has fallen for her too ;)

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sweet cheese on crackers! you didn't even describe what Hero looked like & my oddly
ahhhhh can't wait for the next update

Oh my god I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story! I was actually just thinking yeaterday how there isn't many superhero stories on here :D This story is just amazing & wonderful & well written & just wow.
Now I'm going to go read all your other stories.

Okay so you're an amazing writer. First I read The Essence of Sin now this. Wow. I love Hero and I don't know if this is on purpose or not but I love how she forgets that he also saved her when she was eight

Jeez, two weeks at my sister's makes me fall behind in like, every story!!!

Anywho, I love, love, love, love, love where you're going! And I won't even say any of my guesses because where your stories are involved, my theories are usually wrong. Although my sister hates me because of my "intuition" when we're watching anime, especially like in Ghost Hunt or Psychic Detective Yakumo or even a few others, I can't figure your stories out. That interests me.

I have ideas, but I'll reserve judgement. I can't wait for more! And I love how you've finally given some of the secrets away! But there's more and I can't wait to find them out! :)

Brilliant chapter!
His skull? In HALF? Dang. He's so cool about it though, rofl.
I like his name and the story behind it. Very neat.
As always, an amazing update. Eeeek, they're gonna work together!
You're awesome, this chapter was awesome and your story will forever be awesome. :)

HOLY COW!!! I think I love you! This story is just...amazingful!! Now I can't wait for the unmasking of Hero=D

I don't care what anyone says, I love his name! I mean I would have never expected that to be his name. This has to be my favorite chapter so far. He's so charming! I loved his Peter Pan line. I love that you're updating so often! I'll be waiting to read more about Hero!

So... I've been away from a computer for like, a week and a half. I log onto Mibba and see Superhero has been updated. And I'm like "YEEESSS." So I go and I'm like "WHOOAAA. MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER." And now I'm like "MORE MORE MORE." And like, yeah. More [: Ah, Hero's adorable. It's hard to make flying seem not-so-gay, but you did a good job with that :)
I can't wait for him to be unmasked [:

You have managed to absolutely blow me away with each and every chapter of this story. Your writing style is incredible and keeps me completely intrigued. The way you describe Elena and her journey as she progresses... I can't even find words that accurately describe how I feel about this story. I'm being a bit redundant now. Getting back on topic, though, I am still in love with every aspect of this story, and it is the subscription I look forward to reading each day. I love that the reader follows Elena as she moves through the story. She is such a brilliant, strong, and independent protagonist - a very admirable character. And I love that the reader is slowly being introduced, little by little, to our "Hero," even though his name is slightly silly. I'm going a bit over-board on the length of this comment, so I'll end by saying that I'm waiting with baited breath for the next update as a dedicated and enthusiastic reader. :)

Hero is charming, and i absolutely love him!! im in love with this story, and the characters!! can't wait for next chapter :D

Chapter 12: That was so cliche, but I loved it! I love that his name is Hero and I can't wait to see know what he looks like!
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I like the twists and turns this story takes and how he gets his powers is interesting..

That is the cutest baby name I think I've ever heard! It better not get hate mail! (See? Such a great name that I'm already defensive over it... I didn't really expect that. =/)
And that Peter Pan reference... made right after I though it would be funny if he shouted "Off to Neverland!"... that literally made my day. The coughing after the laughing was definitely worth it. =)
This was absolutely worth waiting for, and one of the best things I could wake up to. So, I feel like I should thank you.. =)

I am officially in love with Hero.

His name is so ironic, yet it also isn't... He's very charming and amusing, that's for sure. I'm so glad he decided to take Elena with him. I just want to hug the life out of him (:!

I absolutely loved this chapter. By the way, how many chapter do you think this story is going to take? Let's hope its 50+ ;D.

Update when you can! <3