Twenty-One and Invincible - Comments

omg ... I am seriously crying that is so sad :'( I feel for her I really do... This story is amazing.
Update soon!!

I love this story
not going to lie the begining of the chapter made me cry because I lost my grandfather almost a year ago and I still miss him dearly, but the end of the chapter totally made up for the tears
loved the update
cant wait to see what her grandpap and patrick were talking about
please update soon

awsome!!!!!!! haha, i wonder what pat and grandpa were talking about?:)

i loved it!! omg, so glad he woke up!!
can't wait for more!!!

I love this story :) the beginning of this chapter is almost what I'm going through except she passed away right away, but your chapter kinda helped me in a way

Aww, Pat and Carmen are so cute.
I wanna know what Gramps has to say though so please update soooonnn!
:D

hahahaha busted by grandpa and yay he woke up, can't wait to find out what he said to Patrick...
Love it !!
update soon :D

I love this story! Please keep it up!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

ahaha pat talking about the oncall room ;) lmao
i wonder what they talked about? great job:)

I wanna know what he talked to Patrick about, lol. Great up, glad to see he's awake. Keep it up XD

ohhh i wonder what grandpa told pat!! and what hes gonna tell her!!
loved the update!!

new reader. this chapter had me sobbing. my grandmother passed away two months ago, and I am still struggling through all the different emotions. her feelings in this chapter capture everything i went through and am still going through.
i know i shouldn't have been crying because her grandpa woke up in the end, but i can't help being one crazy ball of emotions.
can't wait to see what happens next.

Soooooo I bet grandpa gave pattycakes a good talking to ;)

Yayayay, grandpa's awake! Wonder what that talk with Pat was about. hmmm. ;)

i loved this chapter
while it was really sad i still liked it
please update soon

That was a little sad :( please let Grandpa get better!

Love it!! I hope her Grandpa gets better and I can't wait for more to happen with her and Patrick!!

I Love it! Please continue!

i loveee this story is soo good
keep it up :)

awww i feel so bad for her and grandpa!
but patrick was so sweet!