Danger Line - Comments

Amazing update :)

Such a lovely chapter!!!:) but one thing don't you mean death certificate instead of birth certificate? Or am I wrong bc to me it kinda didn't make sense idk...anywho great chapter!!!:)

Oh my god I cried when Kari died and then cried again when she was reunited with Matt and her son...Hope to see more soon :D

yay! death to the tombstone!! ... o.0 i love the hulk and superman reference =D i'm thinking some really interesting stuff is going to happen at the bonfire xP

Damiens so adorable! I love the nicknames he called Matt and Brian, and then how they immediatly got into wanting to prove their strength. The idea of breaking the tombstone is brilliant, and the way the guys decided to do it was perfect. I'm also so happy with the fact that Matt and Kari are doing so well together and getting closer. Kari seeems to be allowing Matt to get closer and past some of the walls she has had up for so long. Yay for that! I love this story, and can't wait for the next update! :)

I love this!!! :) it's sad but so amazingly written.

Baha, I just knew Damien was going to walk in. And I kind of wish Kari had the chance to beat at the tombstone too. I would massacre my fucking tombstone. Update soon?

Lol I love how kari told damien that she was just checking matt stomach ache. Im glad they broke her tombstone...its about time they did. Great update :)

Wow Kari and Matt have really become close again and they are more intimate though they are still taking small steps.
OMG I completely laughed my head off when Matt got done, their son appeared a few minutes and interrupted their parents!
So the thing that is still holding Kari back talking about her time as a hostage.
She afraid to remember what happened to her and she doesn't want Matt to know the horror of what happened to her.
YAY they finally destroyed the tombstone!!!!!
Aw Matt as the Hulk and Brian is Superman!!!!!
I cannot wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Poor Damien! That's all I had to say about this chapter besides, Yay they've broken the tombstone!!!! Update

Fans do some of the nicest things...

*new reader*

Yay! At least hose two are making some progress together. I just hope that she gets enough strength and courage to tell him what happened to her over those two years. And I think that's swet what the fans did for her. (: update please!

aww very sweet update! i love this story so much

I think Kari should write back to those fans. Most fans would be happy that you were gone, even though they wouldn't like Matt sad. It's cool that they're going to break the tombstone and burn the death certificate. It'll be good for them. Update soon?

Oh my god I love gunslinger!!!!! Awesome choice! Wow so yeah them breakage her tombstone sounds like a good idea for them to do :) great update,cant wait for more!!:)

What a sweet chapter! Loved it!

I"m so happy that Matt and Kari are making progress.
I love them together :)

Im glad kari and matt are making progress :)
Great update

Wow what the fans did is very heart felt because even though the fans are very jealous that Kari married Matt and have a son together!
The fans really mean a lot, they made things in memory of Kari when she was declared dead.
I am happy that both Kari and Matt are getting closer becoming like they were and more before she was shipped off.
And Kari is making a lot of progress because she has made the decision to move back in the bedroom with Matt since she missed him so much.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Such a great story. I love it and with each new update I find myself loving it even more...haha. Looking forward to the next one.