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  • fictionsymphony

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    Their love was just sweet and beautiful.
    Im really loving this story.
    October 14th, 2010 at 11:11pm
  • pjrox

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    The flashbacks are really sweet & cute. :( love where this story is going x
    October 13th, 2010 at 02:49pm
  • xoxoxomgw

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    Cant wait to see where this goes <3
    October 13th, 2010 at 12:44pm
  • starr8nn

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    awww!!
    October 13th, 2010 at 02:19am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    I liked this chapter. It was so sad, yet good. The memories made it even better. I'm really looking forward to the next one. I get the feeling that you're going to have a huge twist towards the middle or end of this story, but that's just my theory...haha.
    October 13th, 2010 at 02:06am
  • Overflowing Ashtray

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    :(
    I teared up while reading the chapters
    reading the memory's was so emotional I can only imagine the despair that he would be in when he relives all those happy moments and realizes that it's nothing more than his imagination
    amazing work! :)
    October 13th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Awe that's so sad..Matt is really broken down that he lost his wife like this. He was his everything and now she is gone :(
    I can't wait for the next one
    October 13th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • darkeyes14226

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    I love those pictures. They're so sad and so beautiful. Just like the music video
    October 13th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • for i have syn

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    Damn... i feel like Kari should of survived. She was Matt's world. This is depressing.
    October 13th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • justhannah;

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    Damn it's sad!!! I fucking hate sad stories but this one is so good...
    October 12th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • avenging angel

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    :'( awwwww poor matt!!!!! This puts in a sad mood I hope t gets happier plz write more soon!!!
    October 12th, 2010 at 10:36pm
  • carpe-vengeance

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    This story is sad and when I read it M.I.A. was playing then those picture made me want to cry because it fit and also reminded me of something
    October 12th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    I would have commented on earlier chapters, but I was crying too much to type. But this is the first time I didn't break down. This story just really gets to me because my boyfriend of 4 years is out in the war right now, and of course the sad tone of the story is definitely a big help to getting out tears. Great story =]
    October 12th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Oh my goodness, when Matt had those flashbacks I wanted to cry....Please update soon.
    October 12th, 2010 at 07:42pm
  • ameliabelle

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    So sad... But i loved it :)
    October 12th, 2010 at 02:09pm
  • hachie

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    Those pictures totally go with the story! X3
    They are all sooooo handsome with black tuxedos!!!!!!
    So after his surprise date for her, they got intimate for the very first time?
    Wow they really pulled through didn't they.
    Too bad she wasn't given a chance to live her life out with her family and unborn baby.
    This story reminds me alot of "Grace is Gone".
    I look forward to the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 12th, 2010 at 09:06am
  • starr8nn

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    amazing...
    October 10th, 2010 at 03:14pm
  • Shadowsgirl

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    it's not fair that she died!
    she was pregnant!
    :((
    please update
    October 9th, 2010 at 01:58pm
  • shortyninja140

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    omg this is so sad :'( such a good story and your writing is outstanding as usual :)
    October 9th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Wow this story had me in tears I feel so bad that Matt and Damien lost her like that especially when she was coming home to them..they lost her...Amazing chapters. I can't wait for the next one :)
    October 9th, 2010 at 12:32am