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I couldn’t help but roll my eyes at the sheer bullshit of it all.

I smiled when I thought about how Alex was most definitely doing the same.
GOD this takes me back lmao

“It’s just…I don’t know if I should tell you,” He said, trying to bite back laughter. “You’re robes…are on inside out.”
again, pure comedy.... this is just
so fucking real LOL, fuck you make
them seem so real

also, yes sean give him shit for
his driving it's my kink... shame him

Lisa, i don't even know what to say
this end is SO good... but also very
realistic. i'm already screaming at you
for a sequel but also probably going
to read this through again???

so so SO good but i NEED to know what
Sean looks like in college... i need to see
his development.

@ Palliser
<3 I’m speechless. Thank you <3

Sean perching on the kitchen island, all knobby kneed and sleepy eyed, completely disarmed me. Even if he was calling me a jackass and micromanaging every step of the recipe, I felt this strange sense of calm washing over me. Like I was witnessing a snapshot of life to come.

why is this so perfect. it could
all end here... and i will be ok
if that was the last line you ever
wrote <3

this is just the kind of angst
my doctor prescribed </333

god its so delicious soaking in
the fact that Sean likes to read
old text because....that's....me :}
we are one.

STILL WEARING THE HOODIE

Oh Lisa. This is so good I really
needed more of that angsty Alex bs
LMAO. i loved it though. wow....Alex
all dumb ass hell and Sean FIXING
him ;}

@ Palliser
that was for you <3

Lisa....shame on me? for not reading
these updates sooner. god fucking damn
they are so fucking good.
the ~peaceful~ Alex & Sean we all need/
want/deserve.....

Lisa....shame on me? for not reading
these updates sooner. god fucking damn
they are so fucking good.
the ~peaceful~ Alex & Sean we all need/
want/deserve.....

or am i having a stroke
and it's just been a hell of
a time for me that i cannot
remember reading that.....

i missed two whole updates??
who....am I?

i missed two whole updates??
who....am I?

TOY STORY SHEETS
T O Y S T O R Y S H E E T S

@ Palliser
speechless is a good thing <3
thank you for commenting! Ily.

LIIIIISA!
another crazy amazing chapter
that is currently leaving me pretty
speechless...
seriously. this is so....real. & like,
so much of a revelation for Alex's
character!
speechless. <3

LISA! This is everything I needed
this morning. A hangover cure of
"softness" <3

"Actual pieces of garbage" -Sean, Sass
Queen

Okay, Lisa. My angel. Rosa is such a
fucking...homie? Is that still a hip/cool
word we're using. She's a homie. She's
the best adoptive mom for Alex & I
need her to adopt me too! I forget...
is she dad's or mom's side of the fam..
??? Jesus Christ my memory is so
fucking terrible. But for some reason
this matters and I need to know.

"Are seven shawls considered extravagant?"
Why am I just picturing Rosa and Sean
rolling up in a taxi with five million pieces
of fabric flapping in the wind like capes lmao

Alex and I had decided to stay under the radar for the time being, but it wasn’t really under the radar to show up to your boyfriend’s aunt’s house in a panic induced state of rage and reveal your plan to fly across the country to rescue him from misery.
<3

There was no guarantee, of course.
This is such a reality check though, like
in the crazy mess of it all this is such a
real and genuine thing that is always
present. damn Lisa. 6 words? and i'm
deep in my feelings.

(Okay yes Rita and Rosa are sisters
scream at her girl, scream!)

Was I dreaming? Suddenly existing in some kind of parallel universe? Or was Alex Ramirez actually spooning me in his bedroom while his family screamed at each other from the other side of the door?
WELCOME TO HIS CRAZY WORLD

Alex you smooth little fucker??

Lisa this was SUCH a good chapter
all I can think about is how you
managed to write this AND you're
back at work during the pandemic??
(we won't talk about my own laziness
when it comes to writing lmao)

Sean: resident sex fiend :}

the aggression!!!!! Alex....you giant
ball of hormones and confusion &
years of pent up anger?? ooooh poor
Charlie. the truth hurts. he's so right
but it hurts...

“You’re fucking crazy!” Charlie yelped, holding his face in his hands.

“At least I’m not a desperate piece of shit.” I spat out, pushing him through the doorway and slamming the door shut as hard as I could.

these are my favorite kind of
exchanges. when characters just
call each other out so blatantly.
i love it. roast each other.

“Jesus, Alex! Did you punch him? What the fuck is wrong with you?”

“Uh, a lot honestly,” I said.

god lisaaaaa, that's so funny. fuck im
mad i didn't think of this line!

this chapter was soooooo good i loved
it give me more soon :}

i'm not mad or anything that there
wasn't a fight..... BUT, on the serious
side. that dialogue between Alex &
Charlie was so sharp and snippy i
fucking loooooved it. also it was prob
a more realistic situation considering
Sean's dad was in the house and
nothing was going on between Sean
and Charlie (allegedly)
aaaaand the little ~moment~ idk why
you ever doubted yourself just so
perfect and well written and <3 !

also you're a fucking insane person
updating this much i love it

@ Palliser
Planning on updating again this week!

@ Palliser

Liiiiiiiiissssaaaa wow i can only
imagine i am READY for it i'm
so fuckin' pumped

@ Palliser
I’m so glad you liked it <3
I’m having way too much fun currently writing that interaction