Horizon Lines - Comments

I just started this and I love it so much <3 I'm glad you kept it up even after you finished it.
It's beautiful really.
Did live in Chino? That's my hometown Lol

Can I just...

You are amazing. And I'm sorry it took me so long to read this update (EPILOGUE, oh god, it's over!) D: But, just know that this story is brilliant. The characters, the intense descriptions (of absolutely everything), the settings. I like the progression; nothing was rushed and it's obvious that you wrote this for yourself. The passion and love for it is so obvious in every chapter. Everything that you've touched is gold. This was amazing and I am so excited for the sequel, you have no idea.

This was such a fantastic story. It's what I look forward to most when I get onto Mibba! I feel like I've watched Alex turn into a completely different guy and I love your characters! I can't wait to read the sequel=]

I loved it. Great end to an even grater story. This is BY FAR one of the best stories I have ever read on Mibba. I can't wait to see what you do with the sequel.

This was amazing (:
I liked the ending. It was good.
Can't wait for the next story

"But look out there, as far out as your eyes can reach. It’s still the same horizon line—the same one you would be looking at right now, in California.”

This ending was perfect. I absolutely love how you pulled the title into the plot. I really loved this story. <3

oh my god, okay, seriously, holy fuck, I loved this so much.

and is it silly that, lmfao, the entire time I was reading this I was just like...imagining Sean doing show tunes through the entire thing. And that doesn't even make sense because just HAHAHAHAH too much Glee.

BUT oh my goddd and it was in Sean's point of view. I know you told me that was going to happen, but still I'm just like :DDDDD I love my gayby. haha. SEAN I LOVE YOU.

Okay, but shit, like, the entire thing about graduation, I fucking love the way you write because I was reading that and I'm like "holy shit, I'm actually going to be doing that next year." and I'm super excited, and just, I loved how you described everything and it was so perfect and Sean had his robes on inside out, and Alex was just too cute with him and just christ can I have mine right now? I just really love how seamless everything seemed about them that night and I loved how perfect everything was like all that shit with Lana WAS worth it. because it was and oh my god it was so cute.

and then the end. holy shit the end.

like, I don't know. Alex seems much more like a kid-

OH MY GOD WAIT I FORGOT SOMETHING.

Charlie latching onto Alex for that moment was absolutely precious. Just. a;kljdfasd/

anyway, Alex is much less intimidating from Sean's point of view. Maybe it's because we can't hear his constant stream of curses and irritability, but I still adored it just a little more because I like seeing him just..so fucking happy and full of life and I adored it. And the mention of the horizon line...it was SO CUTE and I just wanted Alex to maul Sean with kisses because he was being so cute even though that would of been a little weird, but still. it would of been cute. ;)

But, holy shit. i can't believe this is actually over. It's weird, it's like officially all of that last summer, last year is over. everything is moving on and I have new things to go obsess over and I dunno. In a way -cheese- this was like graduation for me (lolololol this sound so lame) but like, I don't even fucking know, it's like, everything's going to be different next year, you know? And it all starts in a week. and we can begin the count down and just praise jesus. I'm really excited, and I'm so happy you decided to share this story with us.

You're probably my best friend in the entire world now, and you know how true that is for me and how much it almost hurts me to say (you know the reasons!) but really, I love you, and I'm so proud of you for telling your babies story. (: I can't wait to hear from them again because I have a feeling the next year of their life will be crazy, and I can't wait to sit along for the ride. (:

Sean, I love you.
Alex, be nice to him.
or I'll chop your balls off.
but I love you too.

and I love you, Lisa.

so sad to see this go!
but i loved the ending!
i loved this whole story period!

oh my god this is so perfect and i haven't even finished it yet (i just read where alex told sean his robes were inside out) aw its so cute and carefree
afkdmgdgr you used the description thing in seans dialogue and i always get super excited when i see that and i always wonder whether people plan that or just write something in the description and add it in at the end erm yes.
you're killing me he said the title too omg this is so cool and it think that this is now my favourite gay fiction novel ive ever read on here because it just is and this comment is hideously long and ive probably made myself out to be a complete dumbass but oh well
but ive just finished reading and i dont think you could make this any more perfect because even if you dont make a sequel (i hope you do), i wont be mad because it had a very lovely ending and there was, im going to say closure because i cant think of the other word at the moment.

That was so lovely. :)
And you're writing a multi-chapter sequel?? Hell yeah!! :D
I'm so excited!! :)
xox

erm im reading this again and its so perfect

d'aww (':

Oh god. I can't even explain how much I love this. You're absolutely killing me.

This story is amazing. It's one of the best I've ever read. I love that you had Alex and Sean's dad talk to each other and that the entire thing was focused on him facing his fear. It seemed so realistic and genuine. Amazing (as always)!

omg yay!! that last chapter was rather god damn gooooood lol ....i thought the way you made the whole chapter really focous on alex and then bring sean in right at the end worked amazing because it was like all that alex had done, been through and owned up to was worth while because sean took him back...it just rounded off really excelently :) ....all in all the whole story has been really well written, detailed an contained perfectly defined characters, so thank you for sharing it ^^.....cannot wait to see what you do with the sequel!
affie xxx
p.s rosa is sooo much like my mum lmao, spanish women their all the same :D x

Ah! that last chapter was so amazing, i swear to god i literally squealed when he sat down with Sean at the table. And i never squeal. (am I spelling that right?) Alex is so brave for just going and sitting with him and then SAYING all that, and THEN holding his hand and KISSING HIS CHEEK. Oh my gosh if i was Sean i would have died with happiness (which i'm pretty sure he did). Anyways i can't wait for the sequel. I saw the page and i was all happy and clicked on it.
BUT IT'S BLANK DAMMIT.
I swear i almost died hen i saw you hadn't started it yet D: that's what my face looked like haha. And then i screamed and my brother just looked at me like 'what the fuck'. Anyways back on topic. I can't wait to see what else goes on between the two. I need more! So please update soon becuase you got me addicted.

Damn! I am so happy right now! I just started reading so I'm not sure what the other ending was like but I loved this one. I'm kind of scared for the sequel though, I really want them to work out and in sequels that doesn't usually happen. But I guess I'll have to wait and see. You're awesome by the way. Mad skills.

That ending was so unbelievabley cute! I loved it.

I loved this.
I loved you.
I'm going to miss my Gayby.
and I'm really glad you wrote what you wanted to this time, because I know it bothered you a lot.
and I'm sorry this isn't a good comment, but you know I'm sort of running on nothing right now.

but, shit, I loved this so much.
Alex was so cute. he was all nervous and shit.
and Sean's DAD. I'm really glad there wasn't something really awful going on between them like I feared originally.
and then Sean was so happy. and it was so right, you know?

fuck, I really adore this. and I was so awake when I started writing this comment and now I'm like slowly falling over in my bed I'm so tired. but I have to eat something before I fall asleep. ;alksdjfasdf fuck needing to do things.

but I'm going to stop now because this is getting rambly, but I love you I loved this please have more for us soon! <3

What she said ^
As much as the last one was adorable, that was more real I guess. I'm so proud of Alex.