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FUCK OFFFFFFF How did you beat
me to it????

And trust me, the Tyler Hoechlin phase of 2015 was nothing to scoff at. IT NEVER ENDS SEAN

And trust me, the Tyler Hoechlin phase of 2015 was nothing to scoff at. IT NEVER ENDS SEAN

Everything was going just fine until Alex Ramirez stomped his way into my life.

the "this little shit" bitty pic from check please in the hockey prince

chapter 5
Sheila you crazy bitch, we love you.
Wow, honestly that's so nice for Alex
his own set of macho boy tools.

“Sean.” I said simply, snorting at how high he jumped when he heard my voice.
nervous gay energy has entered the
chat...

I do love how Alex basically says (and
i'm reading between the lines here)
"get murdered or get in my truck"

Wow Sean really called Alex a big ol
dummy. Put him in his place small boy.
He deserves it.

“We’ve only been studying for fifteen minutes! You haven’t even tried yet, Alex.”
I cackled...

I’d made the mistake of asking him why there was a bear emoji next to my name.

“Cause you’re all grumpy like a Grizzly bear, duh.” He’d laughed.
I can't stand this, how is this SO
fucking perfect... but also, question
How is Alex at Geometry? he loves
wood shop bullshit stuff like...c'mon
Alex this is MATH. Idiot.

Jesus Christ Alex just went straight to
I LIVED OFF OF GOV CHEESE and I feel
that in my soul...

chapter 6
Cafeteria potatoes are NEVER the same
I stand by this.

Oh wow my heart. MY HEART HELP.
Did not see that coming...should have
but I didn't....ouch? Poor Sean :[
Also, LOL at his stupid clumsy self. I
love it so much.

Man, sometimes Alex is just too. damn.
much. that's all. no further comment.

Shit Dad Trope i love it. I want it
raw, no lube. I live for Alex's dad
being a dick. I need him to be....
meanER. rub it in and make it
hurt some more... that's my entire
kink.

God, he was a klutz. (your
klutz)

Feelings have entered the chat.
I do love how Alex is being a huge
piss baby because he's starting to
*gasp* feel? for Sean, or someone
in general????

Give me more. More angst I need
it!! Desperately.

[also wow paige this isn't a
competition.....please check
your language]

@ PaigeyPantsFTW
I LOVEEE UUUUUUUU

eat shit, Palliser.

BUDDYYYYYYY Lmao I love how? aggro alex is in this?? Like lmao he's. he's full of so many emotions and he's just ready to kill everyone over it. but, to go in order:

lol like. his dad a piece of shit tho. like? chill maybe? You called your kid at 11pm. Maybe understanding how timezones worked would be a good idea, you prick. and his mom? lmao what did she want Alex to do, date Maria long distance? presumably forever? Yeah lmao it's super shitty that he just up and left and didn't fucking say a word to her and they've been dating for so long???

I have some questions about him doing that. Like. I know he doesn't process emotions well but like....that's a long time friend and companion that he just? Threw away?? I'd like to process that with him. Can he have a conversation with Sean when he lets his fuckin spines down? because LMAO THIS BOY'S HOSTILITY.

Lmao alright like I just sent you a long rambly video with my questions about swimmers but LOL DOM DOESN'T HAVE ANY HAIR (I am waiting for an answer from my Jake) BUT GOD LMAO I'D BE SO. wow I'd be freaked out if someone came at me with no fuckin facial hair like the flight or fight instinct?? Immediately activated when I can't see someone's eyebrows. Me: I'm gonna fight that guy. And lose. Probably

Okay okay okay but dinner??? Lmao I love Sean standing up for himself? Because my GOD is Alex being a giant tiddy baby and I'm just. Really here for Sean's massive dick. Alex needs to be backhanded a few times by someone who cares. Rosa can also do that I love her big dick too. Because OO the mouth on this boy woulda gotten me shot in my front yard.

BUT hoo wow I love this I love how emotional Alex is (and that he's fucking mean as shit about it) but I'm also truly...shocked that Alex just Told Sean what his fuckin problem was lmao. That's so? good. And sean's just going to let him be a growly tiddy baby for now lmao I can't wait until Sean can like. tame him. tame the rage within. wow.

hoo wow gonna send you a video more soon pls

okay, first off, andy can suck my dick

anyway. lmao Alex is such an asshole. I literally love the dynamic so much? over here acting like it's an inconvenience for Sean to be hurt? like. sean's fucking bleeding and Alex is being prickly like lmao these two are going to be the death of me???

also lmao THEATRE YOU SAY??? SEAN WANTS TO BE AN ACTOR???? I assume stage let us have a conversation about what he wants out of his acting career and how nosy I can be about it. does he sing? CAN HE DO MUSICALS? ive been on a pippin kick lately he could be pippin probably. DOES HE WANT TO MOVE TO NEW YORK FOR BROADWAY? lisa.

lol i've gotten very off track do you see what this does to me? too much.

BUT I'm very pumped to see how these two develop more? like. God Sean has so much nervous energy in him I'm really excited to get to see Alex calm him a bit? And also have Sean soften the edges that Alex has made for himself. There's so much that's going to happen I'm absolutely rabid.

@ Palliser
omg u dork <3

eat shit paige. here first :}

My thudding heart almost broke free of my chest when I saw him attempting to stand up. His hands clawed at my forearms as he struggled in vain to get a good grip, fingers digging into my flesh. Shit, he was kind of strong for such a small thing.
hear me out: a smol cat <3

Isolated Gays. Say it with me
Isolated gays finding themselves
outside of their natural element.

“What are you doing here?”

“Why? Does it bother you or something?” I couldn’t keep the annoyance out of my tone.

“No!” He replied hastily, cheeks starting to redden. “I just...I was surprised. I thought I knew all of the theater kids around here. You completely missed rehearsal.”

I scoffed.

“Yeah, no. Not here for that. I’m building shit for the set.”
Alex is asserting his butch
qualities. Love this. He's
letting Sean know he's good
w/ his hands :}

Okay but. Sean? Are you ok?
Your dad...forgot you? Love
that...also love that Sean and
Parker have names that can be
read as first/last and make sense.
Cute.

Love this chapter. I really love
Alex as snarky butch gay <3

LMAO I REMEMBER ALEX RUNNING OVER SEAN. christ. okay. lmao.

listen, it might be because I've been watching a lot of Pixar the last few days but Sean is so. Animated and funny and adorable and I am in love. protect my son. even though he's been hurt but I think he's got some cartoon heart eyes going on so I'm gonna. let myself sit with that.

and rosa. how did I forget?? wow how did I forget so much. I'm actually disgusted with myself. I love Alex and how weathered he is and I cannot wait for him to have soft little Sean bean there to help make his edges a little rounder. WOW I cannot wait for more.

lmao. fucking hit him with his car. the best meet-cute. please kill me.

I love you bub. You know I'll be waiting for more!

yessssss, hit him with your car Alex let him
know who's boss :}

loving and living for these guys and the thrill
of remembering little details as I re-read them!
maybe my brain hasn't been turned to mush
after all????????? (it has)

@ PaigeyPantsFTW
Ahhhh I love you thank you so much! I’m so excited to rediscover everything along with my fav people <3

Alright.

I am honestly BESIDE MYSELF. All of my favorites coming back and writing again? I'm. Wow, I'm just really happy all of this is happening.

But to get things started: wow I remember nothing lmao. literal goldfish long term memory. I'm so excited for the opportunity to get to devour this all over again. I mostly remember big feelings about this story as a whole but time has stolen any Substance to those memories. just that they once were there.

But this little blip right here, getting reacquainted with Alex's rage all over again wow. it's like stepping into an old dream. the fog's just starting to clear. But wow I can't wait to get to know him again and get Sean back (there's a bright happy cloud there!).

I'm just really excited to get to know and love this story as much as I did back then and I'm loving this mibba renaissance. Love you lots and can't wait for the next one!

@ Palliser
ily <3 I’m so excited too!
Rosa is so much fun to write.
I’m such a sucker for angst and Alex
will bring alllllll the angst!

Let's fucking go.

Wow okay. I'm not going to look back
on my old comments or whatever. Idk
maybe I will but not right now. These
are fresh (re: old, forgetting) eyes on
an old favorite.

I'm excited. I remember Rosa, or at
least I remember liking her? I think.
I know this is only the beginning but
obviously I'm a sucker for wayward
youth finding himself outside of all
that is Familiar. I can't wait. I don't
have much to say other than, I love
Alex already? I love lost kids. I love
the troublemakers and the ones who
don't trust anybody.

sean is just so cute blushing all the time lolz, i'm just at the 8th chap bt i had to comment gah!

im not sure what brought my back here to the last two chapters but it just reminded me how fabulous and amazing this story truly is. just reading the ending with sean and alex at the beach i am completely at awe. this is such a good read and i love all the characters and rereading brought back my infatuation and nostalgia from when i first read it back when you were only on the twelfth chapter. come so far :-)

I just started this and I love it so much <3 I'm glad you kept it up even after you finished it.
It's beautiful really.
Did live in Chino? That's my hometown Lol