Horizon Lines - Comments

i loved this chapter!!!

8O
oh no he didn't...

Oh god. I love you. Now keep the olivia happy and you will continue to have my oh so amazing love. Or else...

Lisa, if you could see my face right now, you'd know you didn't make it move too fast. (:
Well, actually, I'm just really excited that finally happened, and probably wouldn't be much solace for you. -.-
But, I don't think it was moving too fast. I thought it was fuckin' perfect. (:
Sean's just too adorable for me to handle. c:

Also: "I just plopped down in a fold out chair that was next to me, cringing when I hear it squeak in protest underneath my weight. Way to make me feel fat…" lmfao. I feel like that ever goddamn time I sit in a foldy chair.

More soon pweez.

eh, doesn't seem all too fast to me.

*whistles* NOW we're getting somewhere!

it didn't happen too fast! I've been waitin for the kiss.
I just hope Alex doesn't freak out and run away and shit cuz then I would have to punch him in his nut sack for doin that to poor little Sean. I don't know how he could be so blind. Sean likes him and he has no clue. He better not turn into a bastard and hurt Sean and then Sean would become all depressed and shit and then I wouldn't be happy with Alex even tho he's just confused.
And its obvious he has some sort of feelins for Sean.
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Oh shit.
That was awesome.

I just hope Alex doesn't freak the fuck out, or something.

'Cause I'll get pissed.
:3

I personally don't think it's moving too fast. I like really long chapters too, so Chapter 10 did make up for most. I love to characters, once again.

ahhh i loved the update!!!
eep they kissed!!! <3
cant wait for more!!!

Ahh. It's brilliant. I love the way you write and I can't wait for more.
It's just amazing.

this is amazing!! your not moving too fast :D
please update soon xxxx

chapter ten; mmmkay. well. we'll start with last going first because i cannot get that kiss out of my mind. eeeeeeeeeek. okay, yeah, i wanted to pump my fist for Sean just growing some balls and kissing Alex. thought i'm saddened to think that Sean is going to implode from mortification or something when he realizes what he's done. i mean, c'mon. it's Alex. god only knows what sort of response he'll conjure up and i'm sure no matter what Sean will just pass or something. haha. but AWW. that is so fucking cute. and maybe it seemed a little fast, but it was like, either this chapter or next, something would have had to happen, right?
anyway. i can't even remember Alex's douchebag friend's name but i don't like him, obviously. but is it weird that i think he totally has one of those secret crushes on Alex? (damn you Glee for making me suspicious of all homophobic boys!) uh. anyway. i think the dynamic though is kind of funny and entertaining. and of course, there's just going to be that one person that grew up thinking it's gross/wrong and it's hard to understand the psychology of it. poor Sean, for having to put up with it, probably most his school experience. AND HE DOES THEATRE.
nothing screams 'gay' like theatre...sorry, but it's true. clearly. umm...yeah. Lana, Laura...whatever. Eventually some girl was going to try and nab Alex, I mean he's such a catch, right? nice boy, smart, polite...who wouldn't be attracted to him? honestly, i just like the fact that Sean likes him even more now because he actually knows Alex. this girl is clearly just going off the 'bad boy' vibe. that bothers me. and gross, i feel like Alex was raped on the dance floor. he'll never get his first dance virginity back!
how sad.
well. anyway, this chapter was lovely but i would appreciate if you could crank chapters out on the hour, every hour. that's possible, right?

AAWWWNNN. jealous Sean, oblivious Alex and a makeout session! The perfect chapter!

damn.
I need more. This is just amazing.

I admire how you don't jump in to the buttsecs. You give the characters foundation to go on- not just- 'OMG you're hot and you're just like me secretly in every way.'

The way you describe the landscape and the way Alex and Sean are almost different, but seem so much alike, is in depth. Alex is like the bad boy going good because of Sean. Sean is like the shy boy being more himself around Alex.

To be simple, I love this story.

all right, so i definitely think that
Alex is just really funny. he doesn't
mean to be but his badassery antics
just end up being comical. like how
he tries to be mean but fails mostly.
or his aunt just ends up being way
scarier.
and fucking awkward restaurant scene.
lmfao. sean is clearly gay, or at least
he definitely has a crush on Alex and
he's just really embarrassed because
Alex appears to be 'one of those' straight
guys. the ones that just....would never
entertain homosexual thoughts. but it's
still really funny reading about sean and
his clumsiness when it comes mostly to
Alex. although, i bet he's clumsy in general.
the latest chapter was good. i don't think it
was rushed or anything.
i bet sean was like, fucking flipping his shit
when he and Alex were out to dinner. srs.
i definitely like Alex. i just do. he tries to be
an ass but it just makes me want to give him
a hug or something. probably similar to what
sean is thinking. and super nice of him to help
tutor him in math....lol.
oh man. i just really like this. i think it's go.
got a good pace to it and things are a little slow
right now but i have a feeling they'll speed up
very quickly when you hit that special point
where stuff starts really happening.

this story is like a drug and thanks to you im addicted i hope your happy lol
no i really enjoyesd this chapter ........hispanian hmmmmmmmm interesting
i probably should of guessed seen as though rosa was spanish but hey im just not that bright
loving it please keep going
p.s
im going to need AA meatings after this lol :) xx

I love you. I loooove you. I really fucking love you Gawd you kill me in too many ways to count. That part about the salsa or whatever on his face and sean just- guh! Gawd! I really really fucking love you. :)

I love watching plays.
I've never had mexican food.
(Is it good? Bad? Fruity?)
I love guessing what people are.
^ I love guessing wrong.
I'm drinking a coke.
Just thought I'd let you know.