Horizon Lines - Comments

loved the update!!!!

Baaah, this is just brilliant. (:
It's cute that Alex is willing to be nicer to Sean now,
haha, because poor Sean might cry if he's deliberately rude again.
But I love how they're growing on each other, even if Alex isn't completely sure what's going on yet. (:
And Sean's acting is cute. c: I think I've just come to conclusion that he's a cute person.

More soon?

I liked this chapter.
Seans statrin to grow on me. He's my favorite. Even tho his behavior is kinda still odd to me. Anyways.
<3

chapter six: oh my goodness "whiny theatre kids and their frilly costumes" made me laugh, really. And I do sort of like how Alex's aunt feeds him even though he's like not hungry and doesn't want to eat haha.
Oh Jesus, Alex IS a terrible driver. Shelia bothers me. Maybe because she bothers Alex is why but I just don't like how loud she seems and...I dunno. I just don't. That's weird, yeah.
Seriously, every time Sean comes up I just feel my heart melt into goo.

chapter seven: "Damn. I thought. Here we go again with this whole painfully awkward talking thing." Oh Alex. It's not that bad....I really enjoyed the small dialogue between Alex and Sean. Even if it did feel a little forced since Alex is obviously uncomfortable talking to people. But I REALLY want him and Sean to be friends, at the very least. Oh and then how Alex just zones out in his own little dreamland. That's funny. Poor Sean. But it was funny...and Sean is ridiculously perceptive. I like that.
Unfortunately Alex is making more...semi-friends. I wouldn't necessarily call them that though. But that's good too.

chapter eight: Don't get me wrong--I didn't hate the guy or anything. It's just the way he made me think sometimes...it was really uncomfortable. I didn't like being pushed out of my comfort zone, and he just seemed to know exactly how to do that. Alex in a nutshell, lol. But that really caught me, sort of how honest that was. And there totally are people like Sean that just make us squirm...but not really in a terribly bad way.
Oh GOD. And I love how the questioning ensues like IMMEDIATELY. Poor Alex, poor, poor anti-social Alex....But Hank is just being a good guy it seems like.
OH. Oh my God, when Sean tripped....-squeal- I don't know why but it's just too fucking cute. He has a huge crush on Alex. I'm like 95% sure of it.
STUDY BUDDIES! Aaaak. YESSS.

Well. It's been a while but I finally found time to catch up (: And I like the new layout. But I liked the original better. Well. That doesn't really matter too much though.

Aw, that wasn't shitty. (:
I really like that Alex is opening up more with Sean.
It's cute. (:
I like how slow you're taking it, too. Even though I kind of just want to force their faces together and make them have happy gay time, I can be patient because that means it'll be all the better when it comes to that point. :)

So seriously, more soon. :)

ohhh yes :*

really liked this chapter. :)
I wonder why Sean don't like talkin bout his family. And I wonder why he's so jumpy. Mmmh. :/
I hope Alex can just face the fact that he likes Sean.

aww alex is being nice (wtf!) lol
wow its going really well
please keep going ,im apsolutly loving
it , thanks a million
xx afeon

so hes gonna be his tutor ;D
i love this!

Aw, Sean's just toooo cute.
And I like that Alex is almost letting some of his walls down. (:
More soon?

Really love this story :)
I love alex and sean. hehe

new friends? o.O

it amazing from start to middle or chapter 6 or whatevers lol but get better soon
and please update apsolutely loving it :)

Aw, I really like Alex when he's calm.
I think this building props thing will be really good for him.
Sean is still absolutely adorable. :)

I really liked this, and I hope you feel better soon! :)

Aww so cuteee

ha.

I LOVE this :) but i have a complaint! now alex seems to be someone who's very aware of how people and things work (or so he think) but he's not very self-aware so in the first chapter when he admits to being scared it seems like a strange thing for him to say :/ now in the SIXTH chapter when he (kinda) admits to the move being great but then turns around and DENIES the fact that he wants to see coffee-shop boy, that was flippin' amazing! i LOVED that. i also love how your characters are sooo different from each other and VERY unique. :) great job.

That was WELL good. Please keep writing!!

This comment's going to be lame because I've got to go
soon, but I wanted to say really quickly that I loved this
update. Sean is so adorable I almost can't stand it, and
I can't wait for the next chapter! And Alex, you've got to
love him.

You SERIOUSLY need to update this, Lisa. Not joking <3