You're Gone - Comments

i read this story a LONG time ago and it really stuck with me. so much so that I searched Oliver Sykes and went through every single story until I found it. and I am so glad I did. Thank you for writing this.

I was so worried this story was gonna have a sad ending, but you surprised me! Thank you for writing this, it's one of the best fics I've read :) It has so much emotion and I got really into the story line.

This story was one of the best i've ever read. Thanks for writing it. xx

Although I'm so upset to see this end, I think it was the perfect execution for this story. Honestly, I really don't think you could have done a better job on this, it was absolutely just that grand.
I'm super stoked for Selfish Machines now, so you keep it up deary!

This story had a rather simple story line; girl does drugs, loses baby/ boyfriend and then returns. Frankly it has been done alot on here. What YOU did however to this story was turn it into an amazing emotional and REALISTIC journey for the readers and im guessing yourself. You started off with a bang and carried it through all the way. Frankly when I started reading this I was taken aback and rather...hmm apprehensive? about trying to relate to the circumstances but I was completely engulfed by your characters and their situations. So THANK YOU for writing such an outstanding piece of work and placing it on mibba.

Can I just- just, like, get a pocket sized copy of this and carry it around with me forever?
I have no idea what I can say that hasn't been said yet, but I feel like this really deserves a good send off comment.
I really, truly admire what you've done with this story and its characters.
I've loved every second I spent reading this.
Your work is phenominal.

What you said in the author's note, about love not being perfect, you're right.
I think that's been the best part of this reading experience.
The story is real and raw and emotional, and it made Oli and Tris real people.
You've made all of your readers go through this stuggle with them.
That is one of the most important skills in a storyteller, and you are a superb storyteller.
It's been amazing, love.

I've never read a better ending to a Mibba story, honestly, I am very very happy with it. Best Oli Sykes story I have ever read.

oh im so happy that they ended up together. this was written amazingly and you did an excellent job. there isnt really much else i can say c:

It's weird to close this story. I feel like I've grown so attached to the characters and it's hard to break away from them. I think I'll alsways keep a piece of this story and I think you for expressing such a beautiful piece of literature.

I just read the entire thing!! I am in LOVE with this story, and I wish I knew how it ended! Love it! :)

Weeelllll I just started reading this. And I read the whole thing. And let me just say, you are just fantastic! I absolutely love your writing! I completely adore every single thing about this story; the story line was insanely original. I love orignal plots (: They're far more interesting than the ones that always start out the same!

I can't wait to read the next/last chapter of this story! I'm intrigued, really, I want to know how it ends :D

i really dont want this to end :( ,every chapter leave me wanting more.....

Nooooooooo I want them together ):

THERES ONLY ONE CHAPTER LEFT? damn, I'm gonna cry. I really want her and oli together..I want him to stop thinking and caring about everything else and just to focus on her and his love for her. Ugh, men.

God.
I really cannot comprehend your genius.
Like, ugh- god!

The last chapter will be bittersweet, unless you make it depressing.
Then I'll be sad because it's over and because you made it depression.
I'm predicting some tear shedding.
Anyway, I just want you to know it's been a pleasure, love.
I've loved reading this.
I hate that it's ending.

Aww this chapter made me kinda sad.I really want Tristan to be happy ^-^.And lunch with Amanda seems like it'll be awkward haha.I can't wait for the last chapter!

Noooo! You can't do this to me! Or rather to them! They should really really stop listening to reason! Oooh no. I can't live with this! Why didn't you tell that this was going to have a horrible end.
Aaaah this chapter just made me so fuckin sad... :((
And what does it mean "you're important though"? I thought he'd love her... well he does, but this words seem to hurt me more than Tristan :D
Is she even supposed to feel happy ever again?
In some point it all makes sense, but I'm still crying.

Soo many questions, can't wait for the next chapter x333

(Oh and don't get me wrong I don't want to criticise what you wrote! Of course this chapter is as perfect as always!)

Loved it. Absolutely lved it. The ending was perfect! I love d what you added so freaking much. I loved the goodbye too. So perfect! Flsjflskdld can't wait for the next chapter! Can't believe this stories almost over already!

I'm sad there's only one more chapter left :(

Please please PLEASE tell me that she isn't going to kill herself now!!! I'll legit pay you (in hugs...) if you let her live *nods*