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whens the next update gonna beeeee

It seems that I have run out of chapters. This is a problem. Post soon, please ;)

oh my gosh. why is oliver being such an idoit! he doesn't want to get hurt??? he is hurting her by being like this D: ohmyohmyoldskjfsldkj im like speechless! ive got a lump in my throat as well, you write with such emotion that im feeling it too! urgh, oh man. after all there shit they really should just be together, oliver should stop thinking of himself and think of tris! she had the baby inside her and felt it all, oliver left her to deal with it all alone. this story is just so good and so deep, the plot just keeps getting so much better! update again soon :D

I hope Oli isn't using Tris.I can't wait for the next update :)

Jesus Christ, can Amanda just f*** off? She's pretty, she can easily find another bloody guy...lol wow I'm an a******. OHWELL.

Yay you updated! :) So, this chapter made me angry.. Oli....well, he's a jerk. I feel like he just used her. =/ He needs to get over what happened and realize Tris is who he really wants. He would be so much happier with her. I'm sad to see this story is almost over, but happy to see that you're starting a Tom Sykes story!

Well this was a nice surprise to come home to :3

I loved this. Goddamn Olober. And poor Tristan. I just want to scream, this is so frustrating. But it's goodness makes up for it's frustrating-ness, so it evens out ;)

I LOVE this story! Can't wait for more..

update ?
love it

The two should really just get back together!
update soon :)

oh my gosh. you have to give them a happy ending otherwise ill cry!
its so sad ): i suppose he cant just give up what he has now to be with her.
its sooooooooooo D: and he is being cute! i dont like him, he should leave her alone if he isn't going to be with her properly. he is just making it so much worst for her. silly silly confused boy.
update again soon! this is just an amazing story, so emotional and sad!! brilliant chapter and writing as always!

I loved Tris' internal monolaogues in this chapter.
Very, very well written and very emotional.
I'm glad we're still in the - I don't know if 'happy' is the right word - 'denial' phase, I guess.
I like seeing the caring side of Oliver.
Right now, I'm really interested to see how things will get resolved - if they get resolved at all.
As always, you've done an amazing job.
I really think I've said all I can say at this point.

bloody hell!!!! i want to smack him, he's up to something. I just know it.

I completely love this story but it's sort of breaking my heart because my friend is in the same situation right now. It kind of helps me see where she's coming from though. It's just rough.

Also, as soon as he didn't say "I love you" back I knew things were gonna get bad.

Two things:

1. These past few chapters have actually reminded me of "Lips of an Angel" by Hinder (don't shoot me!!!)

2. Asdftrecghufuikkvfry.....I can already tell that shits gonna hit the fan again :'( Don't be TOO harsh though please?

Loved this chapter, makes me wonder if they get caught....

Please let the cutesy-ness last! Lol. Grr Oli is so confusing. Does he love her or no? He needs to make up his mind on what he wants! Great chapter though. :)

It scares me to know that he's destroying her. AGAIN. I didn't like Tris at first but I've grown so attached to her! These past few chapters have sealed it for me, I don't want to see her hurt but it's so interesting to read.

I just love these two more and more with each chapter, which I didn't even think was possibile br0. But I do, fo'real.

Ugh poor Tris. The girls getting putthrough the wringer of emotions. Damn you olober. Why you gotta be like that?

Love love love, and as always, can't wait for the next chapter! :3 :*

This chapter was so lovely.
Although it wasn't quite happy, it was still a bit lighter than what's been going on lately.
I feel like you timed this perfectly, because, like Oliver, we kind of just want things to be okay between those two for a bit.
We want to take a break from the fighting and the tension and the drama.
I feel like I'm on the same wavelength as Oli.
So, yeah. I would say it was sort of refreshing, even if I know it can't stay that way.
I'm really looking forward to what's coming next, and how everything's going to be sorted out in the end.
Wonderful work, love.