Veni, Vidi, Vici - Comments

  • dinugget

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    omg, the mum is such a bitch.
    December 28th, 2010 at 05:07am
  • Rain On Their Parade

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    I stumbled upon this only an hour ago, and I'm addicted. Really really great. I love it.
    Can't wait for more.
    December 27th, 2010 at 07:52am
  • MarriahShadz

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    That was absolutely hilarious.
    Bryony is a hoot and definitely seems to know Marc very well.
    I think your dialogue for this chapter was great. The conversation between the three was believable while not seeming forced, if that makes sense.
    I cannot wait for your next update.
    December 26th, 2010 at 07:18am
  • Voyage.

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    'When can I expect grandkids?' hahaha that made me crack up I liked this chapter a lot(: I'm getting my emails again so it's all very happy :D
    December 24th, 2010 at 04:37pm
  • Misty_kawaii23

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    love love love! I don't know what to say anymore. I'm just... amazed... xD I'm really in love with Marc now. rofl. xD
    December 24th, 2010 at 01:34pm
  • dinugget

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    SHE SHOULD JUST FUCKING GO WITH MARC ALREADY.
    December 24th, 2010 at 08:33am
  • Voyage.

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    :O You updated like 4 times since my last comment and I never got the emails! So now I read through them all and I absolutely loved 16 :D The one you said you thought was too sweet and sickly(: This is probably my favorite story on this website because you are a fabulous writer and it really draws you in :)
    December 22nd, 2010 at 07:00pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Sudoku!
    This was so cute.
    I can't wait for the next update, I'm so hooked it's ridiculous.
    December 21st, 2010 at 09:19am
  • XtremeFairy

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    awe there so cute together :D
    December 21st, 2010 at 12:46am
  • clve

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    This is so nice. I really like it. [=
    December 20th, 2010 at 12:53pm
  • clve

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    This is so nice. I really like it. [=
    December 20th, 2010 at 12:53pm
  • dinugget

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    yay!
    she's going to meet his mom!
    December 20th, 2010 at 10:58am
  • Pansy886

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    so an idea of where to go now maybe might be to stick with the original plan, because it seems to me the last chapter is them starting over but not forgetting. i don't know if that really made sense...

    anyways, i liked the chapter, its nice to read about a boy that understands what is going on in a girls head, usually boys are portrayed as stupid blind fools in the game of love. cant wait for the next chapter.
    December 20th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • MarriahShadz

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    This story has quickly become one of my favorites on this site.
    Never fails to bring a smile to my face.
    Can't wait for your next update.
    December 18th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update..I'm glad that they're going to take it slow and get to know each other well. but I hope that they will kiss again soon :D
    December 18th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • rainbowpoop

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    I command you to update :)
    December 17th, 2010 at 01:42pm
  • Audrey Hepburn.

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    Update....or else....ELVES WILL COME TO EAT YOU!so please prevent an elven attack...
    December 11th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I just found this story and love it :D
    I can't wait for the next one.
    December 11th, 2010 at 09:49pm
  • ShannonMarie

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    i LOVED this chapter :)
    December 11th, 2010 at 07:57pm
  • dinugget

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    nooo, don't change it!
    it's perfect, and it's sweet and not sickly at all.
    December 11th, 2010 at 09:25am