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  • Voyage.

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    I have mixed emotions about Marc. I don't like him. But I want to like him. So it's all very confusing.
    Am I the ONLY on who hasn't seen or read anything Harry Potter? I supposed it's a good thing I"m forcing my mom to get me the books for Christmas XD
    November 22nd, 2010 at 02:38am
  • TheLegendryELF

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    lol...tht bit in harry potter disturbed me too and at the end when dobby died... my friend started sobbing and nearly everyone could hear her....i mean u cnt blame her....i myself was about to vry....dobby will surely be missed and so will fred weasly (after deathly hallows part 2 will come out next year).....

    PS..... awesome chapter once again!
    November 21st, 2010 at 08:51pm
  • fiction tears;

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    you are really descriptive, this chapter kinda fills out the "unknown" feelings stirred inside Marc!
    BRAVO!
    Waiting for the next chapter c:
    November 21st, 2010 at 11:30am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Who knew a trip to a convenience store could be so cool?
    Loved the update and I cannot wait for your next one.
    November 19th, 2010 at 03:23am
  • Voyage.

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    You know... I feel like I'm on this bridge with Marc, about to push him off into the river below because he did something horrible, but just as I'm about to shove him off he does something sweet and I go aww and pull him back. And then the cycle continues all over again. Haha
    But anyways, I liked this chapter(: You're a fantastic writer :D
    Woot Harry Potter!
    November 19th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • la gaudiere

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    This is so so so so sooooooooooooooooo good.
    Like, I honestly ADORE it<3
    November 18th, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • fiction tears;

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    Wonderful!
    I am obsessed with this.
    November 18th, 2010 at 03:33pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Just re-read this cause I had to. Just as bloody brilliant as before.
    On pins and needles for your next update.
    November 17th, 2010 at 08:47am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Can't stop smiling after reading that.
    Well played, Marc Winston, well played.
    Looking forward to your next update.
    November 14th, 2010 at 09:32pm
  • Voyage.

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    Ha, I was wondering if those flowers were real! I found it really sweet that he actually looked up what flowers meant! That kind of redeems him from being such a horrible person hahaha :)
    Love this(:
    November 14th, 2010 at 07:58pm
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    The last chapter really showed what kind of person Marc is and I like how it was because of Grace.
    The flowers was brilliant too!
    Marc is too cute!!!
    November 14th, 2010 at 07:38pm
  • fiction tears;

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    Best story ever!
    OMG! Obsessed with this.
    More should be awesome! :*
    November 14th, 2010 at 02:29pm
  • debzxxx

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    awesome story! update soon :D
    November 14th, 2010 at 12:43pm
  • voidoids

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    As always, lovely updates.
    I've said this before, and I'll say it again, but I adore Marc and his character. He's realistic, stupid and such a typical teenager--but I like that even though he can be a ladies' man, he can still be unsure of himself and babble. Makes him less cliched and more human.

    Have I mentioned that I love how it doesn't always start with Grace? Oh, and I like the 'cactus powers'.

    Keep up the amazing work!
    November 14th, 2010 at 11:11am
  • TheLegendryELF

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    once again...thnks for the shoutout :D
    November 14th, 2010 at 11:05am
  • carlyb

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    great story update soon!
    November 14th, 2010 at 08:34am
  • Kitty ;

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    Hey I just started reading this story today and I really really love it :D
    I love the characters and the plot :)
    I can't wait to read the rest! :D
    November 14th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • Paranomasia

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    This is getting intense... Oh, Marc, getting himself involved with 3 girls in one night. -tsk tsk-
    November 14th, 2010 at 12:35am
  • HellVolhardZelinsky

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    This is awesome!
    Keep going! =D
    I cannot wait for the next chapter. I just read all the 10 chapters at the same time. XD
    November 12th, 2010 at 02:31pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    I truly love how you paint your scenes.
    The details and the descriptions are so well written that I have no other choice but to be sucked into this world that you've created so wonderfully.
    I simply cannot wait for your next update.
    November 12th, 2010 at 04:54am