"She does crazy shit to me, every time I see her-“he paused, as if looking for the right words “you know that feeling you get when you’re stuck in a snow storm and you suddenly discover a group of Eskimos and their igloo then they take you in and like give you hot chocolate or something, that feeling of relief, of hope, joy, warmth and that tingle in your body as you drink the hot chocolate?” "Yeah, it’s like that, and sorry for the terrible comparison, but that’s the only way I can describe it right now. She warms me up, she does this crazy shit to me that makes me feel safe, happy and loved, it’s like nothing I’ve ever felt before.”
That was the sweetest thing I've read in a long while. I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story.
sorry if i'm annoying but i just had to do this. i felt that i didn't say enough on my last comment so i'll just ramble and say it here. i just love, love, love this story too much and i just wanna say how amazed i am and that you're a great writer. i may like it just a little bit too much but whatever; what could i lose? so yeah that's pretty much it. i appreciate your time. oh and please update.
AHHHHHHHHHHH. this is too good, just too good. Infact, it's very good. very very good. fantastic actually. mind-blowing, amazing, mesmerizing. please update soon!
This really is by far the most loveliest story I have read in a long time, and I agree with the comment above, it was written cutely. How they kissed over books, and I love how you show that Grace isn't as perfect as most people rattle them off to be (as I regrettably do). I am so jealous you've seen Harry Potter. I am the most obsessed in my whole entire grade, and I have yet to see it. And my best friend told me about that horcrux part, and said she was scarred for life. I'm forcing her to the movies with me to watch it again, because we're both HP freaks--I'm rambling. Sorry, back to my praising of your wonderful story.
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. NEVER EVER STOP WRITING THIS. And the new layout (though I'm not entirely sure if it's new or not) is very lovely. I'm quite jealous of that green strip near the top.
For something that wasn't supposed to happen, I think it was written quite well. I was literally holding my breath thinking that they wouldn't kiss and then they did. This is probably my favorite chapter (so far). I really, really can't wait to see what happens next.
Even if you didn't mean to make them kiss, I kind of liked it. XD But don't get rid of the sexual tension yet! I love it! Lots and lots! I think Grace was reading....... Jane Austen! Because she seems like a Jane Austen person. Specifically, Northanger Abbey. :D *nods enthusiastically* And Marc... Something science fiction... probably Star Wars or something XD I just see him as reading something like that at 9 or something ahahaha You're a wonderful writer! I'm sorry you have writers block! I hate when that happens :( I'm going though it right now... haha
Well I just found this story and let me tell you, I am in love. It's so very captivating. I will be honest, I'm not all caught up yet, but I did subscribe. And now I'm commenting. And Marc is a man slut. And Grace needs to speak a little louder because I know a girl like grace and the whole class needs to be entirely quiet when she speaks. I guess I don't really know Grace that well yet considering I just started. You didn't really need that random piece of information,but! I'm hoping Marc (the slut) will make her scream of anger or something :) Anywayss, I'm done rambling and I love this story <3
I love your use of the word skulduggery. Made me smile. And Keira is a very interesting character, she brings about a strange reaction in Marc. It was interesting to see him squirm a bit. Also, I didn't think this chapter was lame, I found it insightful that Marc wants to see Grace as a sister figure. As always, I cannot wait for your next update.