You Win - Comments

This is so cute. I absolutely love Caroline, even with her glaringly obvious flaws, and Maggie, when she's acting like a proper friend, just compliments her so much. I've currently only completed up to chapter twenty seven but I will definitely be back tomorrow (or when I wake up, because it's half five in the morning currently so technically I've already been reading it in the morning), because I have to read the rest of this. The stats say this isn't finished but that the last update was only last year so I have some hope that when I finish what's up that this will be updated, one day in the near future.

The characters just spring to life and they feel fitting - how dramatic the girls can be one minute and then change the next, that just feels so real because hello we're all like that, and Carter's annoying behaviour as a brother is just so common. He reminds me of my own brother except I never had heart-to-heart conversations or even close conversations with him, so his behaviour is where the similarity start and end.

I kind of don't want to leave it now but I need sleep, so I will definitely return and leave you my comments on the remaining chapters. I really love this story and your writing and your characters. They're just all perfect, really.

also love u Marianna YOU are the gem

also love u Marianna YOU are the gem

NO OH MY GOD YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE
WE NEED MORE

Oh my goodness how can it just be left off like that?! I need closer!

Please update soon <3

I am in love with this story, from start to recent chapter- I am fucking glued. But oh my god, he better not be messing with that girl after he kissed her two days ago, what the hell? What is up with that? Luke needs to be straight forward and not confusing. Either way, can't wait for the next update :)

I really really really love this it's unreal

I really really really love this it's unreal

ARE YOU KIDDING ME -_- Yeah, it's been forever since the last update. But this is one of the first stories I ever read on mibba and I have always been obsessed with it. And honestly, I just checked the other day to see if there was an update, and I reread the last chapter. Lol I love you <3

ARE YOU KIDDING ME -_- Yeah, it's been forever since the last update. But this is one of the first stories I ever read on mibba and I have always been obsessed with it. And honestly, I just checked the other day to see if there was an update, and I reread the last chapter. Lol I love you <3

YES! IT'S BACK. I really do love this story and I nearly had a heart attack when I saw you had updated. So glad everything is coming together, with the Luke and Caroline mess cleared up, as well as her bonding a bit with her mom. Can't wait to see what else you hit us with!

BOOM and she's back in the game! Nice one ;D

I STILL CARE.

So excited to hear that you're wanting to finish it. I about died when I saw that you had updated this, and it was good. I like that everyone is happy. Good things, good things.

So happy to hear you're going to finish the story. It was one of my faves.

Are you gonna finish this masterpiece or what?

I hadn't read this for about a year or so and out of every other on-going story this was the one I needed to finish, it displeases me that you didn't finish it. I mean that in the nicest way possible because I love it and though its almost come to a nice neat ending we still need the finale. I really related to the last three chapters and would adore an ending.

Created an account just to tell you that I stayed up until 5:30am reading all forty-three chapters.

please update! I love this so much and I'm so curious about what's to come

So... it's been a long time. And I mean a VERY long time. I can't even remember the last time I commented on this; it took me a while just to figure out the last chapter I read. :O
I apologize Marianna. Because I really do miss talking to you and reading your stories. :(
I'm so glad Caroline and Luke finally worked their problems out! They're together now, yay! And so are Carter and Maggie... sort of. XD However you would classify that relationship.
But I really am loving this, and sorry again for taking so long to catch up and leave feedback. I haven't been on for a long time.
Feel free to message me on tumblr(somwhereintothedark.tumblr.com) or on twitter(@L1ghtweight) if you want to catch up. I'll most likely see and respond to you on there sooner than I will on here. I've avoided Mibba like the plague lately and it's tres sad, I know. :/
I hope you're doing well though. :) Can't wait to see how this comes to an end. There will be water works when that happens, don't you worry.