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Hi.
You should update.
Now.
Please.
This story is beautiful, and I cannot stand to be away from it.
So please.
Update .(:

Simply amazing!!! ^.^ <3

i love this. so much.

Publishing material, if not more :)

If I had the rights, I would get this on the market myself. But sadly, :(, I cannot, so I have to say that this is an outstanding book. Everything flows, keep us posted, and I hope to see more of Luke and Caroline in the near future...

Once again, amazing work :))))

Love you too ;) good chapter and sorry for the crappy comment :D

Ohmygosh.
I am fan-girling over this story so hard. It's just perfection. I love it so much.

And my favorite line throughout the entire story is in chapter 21 when Luke, Caroline, Maggie, and Carter are all eating breakfast at the table. And then Maggie tells Luke that Caroline is the happiest that he's going to the bonfire, and Caroline's just awkwardly sitting there, talking about her love for marshmallows.

I guess I'm just trying to say that I love how easy going this story is. It has a couple of bumps, but it's humorous and cute and adorable. It's definitely one of my favorite stories by far.

Continue writing please! I'm looking forward to it! :3

Ohmygosh.
I am fan-girling over this story so hard. It's just perfection. I love it so much.

And my favorite line throughout the entire story is in chapter 21 when Luke, Caroline, Maggie, and Carter are all eating breakfast at the table. And then Maggie tells Luke that Caroline is the happiest that he's going to the bonfire, and Caroline's just awkwardly sitting there, talking about her love for marshmallows.

I guess I'm just trying to say that I love how easy going this story is. It has a couple of bumps, but it's humorous and cute and adorable. It's definitely one of my favorite stories by far.

Continue writing please! I'm looking forward to it! :3

This story.. it's literally perfect. I love the entire thing! I stayed up late last night reading this!

I love you, too. Update soon, though? Pls

AW HAHA I'M SO GLAD MAGGIE AND CARTER ARE NOT TOGETHER BUT NOT QUITE UNTOGETHER
MARIANNA YOU ARE A LITERARY GENIUS
including your poetry that is literally
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and people love it and stuff
anyways
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I had marshmallows in my hot chocolate today
they weren't roasted cause they were in my hot chocolate which made them kinda soggy
but they made me think of you nonetheless

I've missed this story! Poor Andy but like not poor Andy... She did leave hints. You can't MAKE someone like you.

PUBLISH THIS. IT CAN BE AN AMAZING BOOK!

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Sorry for the caps locks. I got excited. :)

I've been a silent reader. But man, that chapter. You literally just kicked my ass out of a minor depression. Thank you for the lovely update! :D

Well wow.. I hope that will simplify things.. At least a little.. Damn... Great chapter.

OH MY GOD. KEEP WRITING.

I have been waiting for this chapter since the moment you mentioned Caroline baking cookies with lily. Well done!

OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD
IT FINALLY HAPPENED O M F G
you are literally killing me right now okay
he kissed her
and she kissed him
and there was a lot of k-i-s-s-i-n-g going on in this chapter
and Luke's sister was on the couch napping
and and and
just ugh omg this chapter just got me

Yes! Aghhh, you don't know how pissed I was gonna be if Luke was just like: "Nahh fuck you, I don't even like you." Lol.
Wellll, I can't wait to see them get official (:

I'm exploding on the inside.
I don't know
Something about the phrasing of "I wasn’t holding my breath anymore because Luke was stealing it and I felt like I was melting in his hands." really got me even though I'm certain I've never felt like that and fairly positive I that I never will.
This isn't over right? Because I feel like there's a lot of things with Tulip and her brother and Maggie and people and stuff.

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING I CAN"T STOP SMILING. :D