You Win - Comments

Oh my Jesus!!! It's about time both Caroline and Luke grew up and told each other the truth. Their little game was getting old, and I was ready for them to be together. I'm super excited and can't wait to see what happens next :)

But doesn't Luke have a girlfriend? Or was that a rumor?!

STFU IM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW I COULD CRY AND IM LISTENING TO TDWP SOUNDTRACK AND IT ODDLY FITS AND EVERYTHING IS SO PERFECT I CAN'T WIPE THE SMILE OFF MY FACE

THANK YOOOOOUUUUUUUUU! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

halleluja FAN FUCKING FINALLY! im so happy with this chapter(: so well done! ahhhh yayayayayay

oh god I didn't mean to imply that you have serious un-fixable problems because that's totally not what I meant but I mean like. Everyone has a few things about themselves that they hate and can't make better.
Like me hating people because I'm scared of them because I don't think they'll like me because I'm a deeply lonely person.... and this just got really spontaneously personal and I'm going to stop.

oh god I didn't mean to imply that you have serious un-fixable problems because that's totally not what I meant but I mean like. Everyone has a few things about themselves that they hate and can't make better.
Like me hating people because I'm scared of them because I don't think they'll like me because I'm a deeply lonely person.... and this just got really spontaneously personal and I'm going to stop.

Um.
Not even terrible at writing it.
Not even a little.
Not even at all.
And if you believe you're terrible at writing I invite you to raid the Harry Styles website thing that mibba created/links you to on the homepage.
Anyways, I hope you sort out any (of the fixable) psychological issues.

So, um, my day may or may not have been made when I saw that this was updated.

...

Truth? Totally made. I am still as in love with this story as I was the first day I started reading it. Don't be too hard on yourself, all right? It's good. It's still got this good conflict, and I'm just sooo ready to see how everything turns out. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON

I randomly started reading this because I saw it on my update feed, and I really like it. You've built such a strong character and the narrative voice in this story is really likable and easy to read.

"Because I knew Carter and I knew that the one thing that would hurt him as much as, if not more than what he did to me, would be to mess around with his best friend"

the "i knew Carter and I knew .." seems wordy

Holy f***ing s***! You're alive! And what are you insane? Not good enough writing my ass! You're talented and I hope that fase or whatever it is, is over and done with!! Hmm.. Poor girl.. I can't believe like knew all this time and did nothing at all.. Not even just to let her know he's not interested.. Damn.. Hmm... Good chapter and I can't wait for more.

ARE YOU INSANE? This is one of my favorite stories on Mibba. How could you call it terrible? Gosh. But I'm so glad you updated!! One update a week sounds AMAZING. <3

And the fact that Luke has been knowing this entire time... smh. That makes me mad that Carter would tell him, even though that is his best friend Caroline is his sister. And how is he not interested?! He seemed mighty interested when he kissed her at the beginning. Poor Caroline. Maybe it's time to move on...

Im crying because of the cliffhanger...wHYyyyYYy

i'm gonna be with You Win TILL THE END IT'S ULTIMATE AWESOME SAUCE. seriously, best story on mibba;) thaks for updating i will wait patiently :)

Gah, I'm chomping at the bit to know what happens~!

THANK YOU FOR UPLOADING CAUSE I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS STORY OK OK I LOVE IT OK

This story isn't terrible at all!
You Win is still one of the best stories I've ever seen on this site.
I can't wait to see how this all ends...
Gah, why did you have to end the chapter there though!
It's driving me crazy.
Update sooooon please!!

MARIANNA OMG WHY WOULD YOU CUT IT OFF THERE SERIOUSLY UGH I SWEAR I AM GOING TO CRY OKAY AKSJDHCLKASJDHCLKAJHWDFL
MARIANNA PLZ
YOU'RE A PERFECTLY ROASTED MARSHMALLOW<3
please update soooooooon c:

so happy you updated. dont discourage yourself, your writing is great! and this story is amazing, its so cute. :)

I'm so glad you updated. and it's ok, as long as you update it's ok, i love this story:)

Y U NO UPDATE NO MORE?!?!?!?! D: i missss thisssss! please update soon! :)