Imagination - Comments

Oh my GOD! That is one hell of a banner!!!!

Now, for the story... Oh my. Such innovation, such fabulosity.

I love your descriptions. They make me feel like I'm there.

Great. Job.

You've got a sub! :)

Wow...this story is amazing. I like the flow of it and I just like how it's written in general. I don't like how it skips around, but I guess it has to be that for the story to work out. I also absolutely adore stories that are written in third person, it just makes it better in my opinion. And what movie, if it is a movie, is the picture from the layout from? Just curious. :)

Very pretty layout I must say, the banner is amazing! I love how it moves :D. and I like how you named the chapters as dates.

Oh, the first paragraph defenitly got me into this. I mean, people are in a room examining this girl, and are extreamally intrested. A girl who has been in a lab for months, and obviously scared and not healthy. I want to know who this Sebastian guy is as well. Oh, interesting, he has a secret as wel. And they must know each other, because she's trying her best to hide it from them.

Wonderful job, your story has an amazing hook to it!

Wonderful update as per usual. I have nothing really to say except your attention to detail is flawless and it always provokes a genuine reaction. I desperately want to know the truth behind Sebastian's identity and the answer to the mystery that shrouds his relationship with the main character. Brilliant!

Okay, so I didn't expect the complete change in the layout; the moving banner is gorgeous though, as is the rest of the page. Anyways, I'm so glad you updated this :D This has to be my favorite creepy story here on Mibba. I love how chapter 5 starts off; it really shows how confused and scared she is. It's also really sad how lost she feels without Sebastian there, even though he may or may not be real. Like I said in my last few comments, this is a total screw-with-your-mind story. You believe the main character, but you also believe the outside forces as well. Still, this chapter has to be my favorite. It's wonderfully detailed and enchanting (:
Lovely job, dear! <3

So he is not a ghost, and he is real. They are in some kind of place where the world outside of the city is unknown. So my guess would be that he is someone who is a treat to the scientists that must be irradiated. x]
And that is my new guess. I'm really enjoying this. It's like I'm a detective trying to understand the person that is Sebastian. I really look forward to each new chapter cos it's like a new piece to my jigsaw to uncover him and perhaps the society it is set in.

This story is very cool. I like Sebastian's character a lot. I would say he's an alien but that would be too obvious. So maybe he's a clone? That would be neat.

Phenomenally original! I am in love with the mystery that is this story. Everything is beautifully written, flawlessly described, and so damn intriguing! I can't wait to read the next update. Subscribing for certain.

This is defiantly like nothing I've come across before. I'm just a little confused concerning Sebastian. Was he real, but died and Dahlia kept seeing him? Or has he been a figment of her imagination the whole time? Still, I love how even though they have mysterious pasts, they seem kind of innocent. I hope the made sense :3
Update soon(:

I like this, but can you tell me about sebastion please(:
Sebastion seems mysterious
I really like this and I am subbing(:
Keep up the good woooorK(:

I've already read this, but wow. Just re-reading it blows my mind.
You're a really good author, srsly yo'
Keep up the amazing work <3

Thank you for the update :). What a nice way to wake up eh? XD. Mmmh....okay, so he is real since he rang the doorbell last time and was heard, so perhaps he is a wanted man of some sort which meant he had to sun away, otherwise why'd he be so interested in the note boom and wanting so desparetly to redeem himself? Well thats what I've got so far, guess I'll have to wait to find whether i was right or not. x}

Well there goes my theory about him being a ghost. On to the next theory XD. Uuuh! The mystery is klling me as much as it's killing her! I believe impatiences will become my new attribute XD. I'm really loving this. x}

I've actually been waiting for this update for a long time, haha! Like I said in my last comment, it's so freakin' mysterious that my heart rate instantly skyrockets the second I click on the name. The details are just perfect - and so freakin' gorgeous - and...jeeeez, where do you get these ideas from? xD I really love Dahlia and how she's loyal to Sebastian, even though, in the future, he may or may not exist? Hmm. It's so creepy and so weird, but so captivating. I'm totally rambling here, I'm sorry, but this is just so brilliant <3
I'm going to have to wait not so patiently until next Friday, huh? xD Anyways, can't wait! <3

Just thought I'd say this: the layout is brilliant and awesome.

Story: I loved how you put so much detail and captured her loyalty to this "man". Her personality really does show within the first couple chapters and the detail was indescribable <3

I loved it and really think you should continue. :)

Hope enough was said for this amazing story. My short description doesn't give this story justice.

Interesting and original. Two key factors to an amazing story :3
Your writing is love, like no lie. This is a lovely piece of work.
Sorry for the crappy comment. It's becoming a pain to type on this old keyboard. I promise I'll give you a better comment :3

You have made my day. :).
I love the character interaction between thenm. Its cute yet still holds a sense of mystery around ththem. I'm really looking forward to the next one. Plus i'm seeing you took my complaining about thr lenght into consideration. x}.

Dammit, Rachel stole the words right out of my mouth. I was literally about to say the exact same thing. Now I have to think of something else. CURSES.

lmfao, I seriously am in awe with your writing my darling. I feel like it shows through just how amazing you are in this piece. In fact, I think this is your best piece yet. and yet I feel like I've said that already. :) But it's the truth my love--very very fantastic.

You never fail to amaze me, you're just stunningly good, miss. I don't want you to so much as consider halting in your writing. Your style is just beautiful, it makes everything so elegant yet simple and you give the most fulfilling details; you know what your reader(s) want to hear and you know how to avoid the things that just drag the whole thing down.

Sebastian is one of the most intriguing characters I have ever come across. He is one of those characters that you begin writing about and every little thing he says and all his habits and mannerisms just demand intrigue and curiosity. He's going to be the one character that the reader can always hypothesise about because there is no true answer to the little details you unknowingly write him with. And all of the aforementioned is what makes him such a realistic character.

I love you endlessly for this, honestly I do. I meant what I said in saying you must write forever, if need demands it I'll lock you in my wardrobe -with Mr. Sykes and Way and Haner- with only a notepad and pen because your writing has become my craving. I love this. I love this. I love this

Update soon, love? :) <3

I am so subscribing. The first chapter was brilliant - wonderfully worded, and just overall perfect. It opened the story really well. The present-day is really interesting to read, so in reference to your question about whether you should switch between the two times, I think you should - as long as you make it clear to the reader which chapter is in which time.

The seoncd chapter is worded just as expertly as the first and has some brilliant descriptions I love the characters - Dahlia and Sebastian just seem so real, and seem to have great chemistry with each other.

Everything about this story is so original, and gripping. I haven't felt this excited about a story in a long time. I can't wait for the next update.