As Fall.like.dominos said you painted a wonderful picture here in both chapters! (I read the first one a few days ago back but never commented). You're truly talented. Your descriptions are wonderful and you really captured your characters personalites well! I honestly don't know what you could improve on for this is just fabulous already! The plot line is so original and mysterious. I can't wait to read more. Keep the updates coming! <3
October 31st, 2010 at 12:44am