In Venere Veritas: There are wounds that are not meant to heal. - Comments

My wound is defiantly not healed. Oh. My. God. I LOVE this story. I'm crying because of how it ended. :-( I'm quite sad that they are not together but it was still a great story! Yes! There should be a sequel. <3

Oh wow, this was absolutely fantastic! Very well written! I cried!
I definitely think there should be a sequel, or some sort of continuation to this!

GAH! D: Nooooo! Ville! D; Very well done! You got me to cry. x.x I wasn't all entirely happy with the ending but that's just my wanting for Ville to be happy. So, good job! It was an excellent story!

Finally got around to getting to all my updates in my inbox,and got to yours,and while I'm saddened to see it end, i have to say, that ending was marvelous. It seriously makes my heart break, and that's when you know you have an amazing story in front of you, one that makes you feel exactly what the characters are feelings. Wonderful job and i can't wait to see what else you have planned, let it be a new story, a sequel or series of one shots :D

-Kassandra

omg. I seriously bawled at the end of this. It was so good. I could feel the heartache between the two. Kudos, love.

BAHH FINALLY FINISHED READING!
I love how you ended it! x3
And a Sequel! =O Oh Lovely! =D
If you do write a Sequel that would be amazing! I'd love to read it ^o^

~NN

Seriously... I casually come on... Go to the stories page and my dream pops up. VILLE VALO STORY RIGHT ON TOP ^-^

Okay, I'll read now O.O

I'm absolutely in love with this story!! I read all of it in 1 day!!!! Its really good, so you BETTER update soon!! lol : ) Oh, i did have a few questions. I'm always real picky about wondering what the characters are supposed to look like. Obviously i know what Ville and the rest of the band look like. But i don't remember reading a description about Zoe anywhere. Also, about Jim....who is supposed to look like Robert Downey Jr.(GREAT choice BTW....yum..lol...but not as yum as Ville). Are we talking drugs and in trouble with the law Robert(younger) or are we talking mature iron man Robert?? Just wondering! Once again, FANTASTIC story!! : )

Just read the update.
I really liked how you took off.
But what are the lyrics from!?
I re-read them a gillion times and I can't put my finger on where I remember them from o.O..
Unless their original, then damnn O.O XD it's very familliar to something I've heard then lmao!

Can't wait for the next parts!

~NN

good luck on your exams!!!!!!! :) i loved the picture painted in my head of the last paragraph. ville singing sweetly and her just listening, then swaying away. magical.

yay! another update! im really glad that you posted this ive been waiting..lol :) <33

Really loving the story! please update soon! <33

I liked the updated chapter. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next one.
Also I loved how you incorporated the jealousy of Ville and how Zoe had flipped it around when Jim asked.
And I also thought it was cute how she was playing it off on the phone about the old lady. =D
Can't wait for the next chapter!

~NN

I like Ville, am unsure about Jim and Love the story =D

Alright just finished the updated chapter, I have to say I love how you brought Jim in,
And I LOVE how you had Zoe finally admit not only to Ville but herself. Whether or not she is indeed married but the point I'm making I guess, it showing that she is only human, and that sometimes life isn't a fair game of chess or poker sometimes.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

~NN

Okay just finished and I loved it!
I agree with Katie above me about that last paragraph lol, she took the words right out of my mouth.

Also It's okay you were very stressed and all and got sick. If it happens to come up again, Take the time to get better!
Of course we'll all be waiting for the next update but please get better first!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

~NN

That last paragraph was beautiful. Simply perfect. And the way you let her be swayed by how adorable Ville looked? That was gorgeous. I hope you feel a bit better, I sympathise with you, I really do.

x
-Katie

It was slow and fast and full of contradictions, just like they were. I loved the chapter, mostly cuz i love a jealous Ville :P but i loved that last line, it just...summed up everything so simply, and just so perfectly. I wish you the best of luck at school!! and i thank you for taking the time out of your busy schedule to update!! Wonderful chapter!

-Kassandra

Alright! Finished up to Chapter 22.
Alright so more unexpected happenings I have to say, I Like! =P
Another interest hmmm its going to end up being a love triangle almost. XD Except so far from what I can see, its Zoe, Ville and I'm taking a guess and saying possibly Johnny(?) and her husband Jim XD (Guesstimating here lmao) I wonder who she'll end up choosing in the end *cocks a brow*
But all in full from what I've read, it's brilliant!
I can't wait for the next Chapter to come out!
Till then, message me or comment and we shall talk more!

~NN

So far on chapter 19. I love it!
I have to say I was not expecting most of the things that had happened throughout this story, and I must say I love it!.
I love stories that are well planned out (as I read at the end of the few chapters you had everything planned) and I love how everything happened in an unexpected light (from my opinion of how I'm seeing it at least)
I really do love the idea of this story, it is very different from most I've read, and even written.
Keep it up! I would love to continue reading your work!. For now I shall finish the rest and give my full analysis when done =]

- Renee aka NN Valo