In Venere Veritas: There are wounds that are not meant to heal. - Comments

Aw, I hope you're feeling better.
Oh, and ANOTHER male interest? Fucking hell, love. You might just kill me. And Ville's got the hump with her again. They both need to man up and talk to each other calmly and rationally. I'm sorry this is crap, but I'm sick. Again :L

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-Katie

Though Short, i loved it lol. Can't wait to see what wise words of wisdom Johnny has to impart :P I hope you had fun in Iceland and i feel better soon!!! Great to see an update from you! And can't wait for the next!

-Kassandra

i loved it as always!

Thank you so much for that 'dedication'. But how do you owe me?!
That chapter was beautiful, and definitely didn't come across as forced in any way. And you should've told me it was your birthday, I didn't know! So happy belated birthday ;)
And yes, Zoe does need to be honest with Ville. Even if she stays with her husband, she needs to actually tell him how she feels. And speaking of husbands, you just KNOW that Jim's going to turn up.. :P

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-Katie

Oh my goodness! The latest chapter was prefect. It fit in amazingly with how chapter 20 ended.

“You like me, but you don’t love me. You fuck me, but you won’t be with me. What the hell am I supposed to think?”
This was my favorite line. I read that, and I thought, "Aw, Ville."
It's amazing how I can actually connect with the characters :)

Gah! i feel like throttling both of them lol :P Great chapter!! And can't wait for the next one!! XD

-Kassandra

I NEED MORE!! I died reading the end of chapter 20. It was beautiful.

i absolutely adore this!

WHY DON'T YOU HAVE MORE COMMENTS?!?

Ahem. Anyway. I'm really quite ill at the moment, so excuse the comment for being absoloute wank. Believe me, it in no way reflects the quality of the story <3
But I've managed to walk away with some SERIOUS quotes from this story :]

'There was something odd about this situation. The tables had turned.' This was so fucking effective. I honestly knew at that point that their conversation today would be different, and fucking hell, wasn't it just?

“I have to tell you something, Zoe-girl. My first girlfriend was Aija, the girl next door. So it began with an A, like when you tune an instrument, or the alphabet. Beginnings matter, and so does the end. Nobody ever cares about the stuff in the middle… The alphabet ends with a Z.”
"Oh fuck.."
He turned around and smiled, genuinely smiled at her, like she was the sun and he had been in the dark for years. “This is it. I’m not going anywhere. I love you.”
This was beautiful. Sappy, but beautiful. It really got across all the feelings of built up frustration [sexual or otherwise, haha], and the obvious love he has for her, although I can see why Zoe would have reservations about a rockstar, and I can understand why she's apprehensive about him actually loving her.
I truly believe that Zoe should also have told him that she loves him, but somehow I think that she's sort of showed him.. ;)
Oh, and you just KNOW that her husband's going to turn up at some time soon.

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-Katie
P.S- I'll miss this story :]

omggg, Amazing update <3

"Nobody ever cares about the stuff in the middle… The alphabet ends with a Z.” GAH!! That made my heart all gooey lol. Wonderful update!!!! Just...gah!! lol. Can't wait for the next!!!

-Kassandra

i love this i love this i love this holy pooppppp!!! ANOTHER UPDATE!!! plllleeeeeeeeasssseeeee?!

Gah!!! As much as i loved seeing that inside peek in Zoe's life, seeing that convo. with her husband i must know more lol. Great Update!! And i can't wait for the next one!!

-Kassandra

Haha, was I quick off the mark or what?!

But jeeeez. Steven's starting to get his sass on. Don't tell me we're going to find out about some deep, dark secret about Steven's personal life? ;] But Zoe. Zoe, Zoe, Zoe. I was getting round to the idea of her being married and whatnot, but I simply CANNOT excuse the fact that he's called Jim. -.-
Also, you came up with a perfectly reasonable excuse for her not wearing a wedding ring, which sort of shot me down in flames seen I was imagining him beating her or being in rehab or a coma or something.. XD
Silly Katie. Clever Abby.

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-Katie

ngbhfjerfdnksdjnfgjhsbdfgrjs !! How dare you toy with my emotions like that!!!! :P
I just read the last few chapters, and wow! I totally did not see that coming!
But, in any case, you still did a brilliant job, and I will not be cancelling my subscription any time soon!
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good updates... THANK YOU

this story is amazing. you are a fantastic writer, honestly. the way you put so much effort in your writings and into detail about what you write and how it's written; it just amazes me. plus the fact that you hid something so cruicial and huge in the storyin a successful way; that's just pure genius. i cannot wait for the next chapter. i love it!

Gah!! Rally want to know the background behind Zoe and her hubby!!! Still feel bad for Ville though lol. Wonderful update!! Can't wait for more!

-Kassandra

"Oddly enough, her heart didn’t hurt at all, because at some point she knew that they weren’t the great love of the other’s lives; she lived for her husband as Ville lived for his music."

This line broke my heart. I know I'm being stereotypical and idealic here, but i really thought that Zoe loved Ville, and that her husband would be a drunken teenage marriage, or something. I know, crap right? Haha. But that was a true confession that not only meant she was saying that it wasn't love between them [or at least true love], but it was also saying that she didn't FEEL it, as opposed to saying you have no feelings for someone but actually having them.
Anyway, this whole comment was long, useless and crap, so I'll shut up now.

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-Katie

Yeah, you got the dialogue between Ville and Mige perfect, the extentity of their friendship really came across well, as did a sort of childish and vunerable side of Ville's personality. I'm anxiously awaiting the next couple of chapters haha <3

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-Katie