You are such a talented writer, seriously. Your story is insanely beautiful, all the descriptions are just so eloquent and detailed. I really wanted to cry after reading Fred's death.
Emotional. ;_;
I just love the whole plotline of this, how she is looking back on her past years with George, as a 40 year old. Mignon is a beautiful character, inside and out, she has little flaws but that just makes her so three dimensional. I just love you, so much, thank you for this story, it is brilliant. I hope that you do a chapter on George when he's 40 as well, looking back and remembering Mignon or something like that. It would be particularly emotive, and I would love to read it. Just a suggestion, hun, but this is gorgeous and any way you write is is amazing!
I know I've said this a thousand times before, but I love the way that you write. It's beautiful. So detailed. I can picture everything, and that's a big bonus.
This chapter made me wan to cry all over again. And it really was heartbreaking to read Fred's death again. It's always been one of the saddest moments in the 7th book for me.
I really can't wait for the next few chapters. Or even the sequel (which I have some idea what it's going to be lol). Anyways, wonderful update, I love it.
I was somewhat stunned at how realistic the arguing and characters and everything was in this chapter - it's usually pretty excellent but this was... wow. The dialogue was just so alsidgasdlABck;adofa f. God, my vocabulary is awful but, man, it was just so real.
Yikes. My phone freaked out. I meant to say *you can tell when you're tired. Anywhoozers. Sorry for creating such a long comment, but in general I wanted to say: I love your story and cannot wait for another update. Also, have fun with your boyfriend ;)
Yikes. My phone freaked out. I meant to say *you can tell when you're tired. Anywhoozers. Sorry for creating such a long comment, but in general I wanted to say: I love your story and cannot wait for another update. Also, have fun with your boyfriend ;)