Oh gosh, I'm so hooked on this story it's not even funny. It's like 3 in the morning and I just read this whole thing from the start and I'm reading on my phone so it took forever! (That was totally irrelevant but I had to get it out) This story is just so amazing. There aren't even words. You're an amazing writer, and your story is hella interesting. Please update soon.
Such a great story.. I mean, the parts that were horribly sad.. most of the story, so far.. they made me feel awful ._. But that just shows you're a great author, you can make your reader feel exactly what the characterr's feeling.. or.. err.. not feeling, since she supposedly doesn't feel.. But yeah. Amazing story written by amazing-er author. Never stop writing. (Haha and I like Asher so much :3 Him and Tammy should get together!!!)