Holy crap! Update soon! I need to know what happens next! Also this is really well written. So good, in fact, that I think you should consider publishing.
Please Update, Please. You have taken time to written these well written chapter please don't let it go to waste. It is not like you had strong chapters in the start and weak chapters in the end. You have strong chapter throughout the whole chapter and keeping the flow of the story going. This is such a great story, no matter how sad it get me it is still one of the best stories on Mibba i have read so far. If you complete this story, meaning you complete a chapter every, the reward you will give yourself in the end will make your day. When you complete this story you have raised yourself to a higher level, because they are some okay stories on mibba with an interesting plot that you want to see play out, however the writer, stop writing because they lost the magic bring them to a lower level. Please Please, Prettty Please Update. I know in the end you will make the right decision.
I just love this story. You can always feel the emotion. So unlike all the other stories on mibba. Well written, well plan. You chapter are always focus. I wish i had your writtening skills
Oh my gosh. I LOVED this chapter! It was deep and amazing and just....WOW!
You know what it reminded me of a little? Inception. Where the woman doesn't believe reality is reality. But I loved how her trust for Tammy transcended her belief in reality. I just....oh gosh. I really loved this chapter!
That new guy is interesting, but I'm not sure if I want him to reappear. I feel like he's one of those miracles that come one minute and are gone the next. It wouldn't make sense for her to see him again as, like, a transfer student at school. That would just destroy the mystery. Maybe one day he needs help and winds up at the carosel where she finds him?
His speech was interesting. A little on the "perfect advice" side but interesting. There are a couple sentences in the first half that were typos or half sentences. You might want to fix those.
I liked this chapter, and i do think Bunny is real i just think she liked died or something, I dont really know. Great job as always and i look forward to when you post again.
GAH! So confuuuuuuuuuused!!!! I don't understand Bunny at all. She could either be the vengeful ghost of who I'm guessing was Marie's sister but I'm not sure, or she could be a figment of Marie's imagination based off of aforementioned sister. But Bunny is so evil and vengeful. And I'm not entirely sure what she wants. I mean, it's clear she doesn't want Marie to forget her, but I'm very confused as to whether she wants Marie to allow all the abuse or to stand up for herself. And I'm guessing Bunny doesn't like Jayden or Tammy because they'll prevent Marie from remembering her?
Oh, and I would like to guess that Jayden said he loved her. ♥ Now he just needs to say it again so she'll remember, lol.
I don't know why, but this was one of my favorite chapters so far!!! I guess i just liked seeing Jaden adn Tammy be there for Marie. Anyway good job, look forward to when you post again!!!!
I liked the new chapter :) She seems to be somewhat better and as much as I hate Kelly it was partly because of her. At least she isn't a complete nuisance. :D Keep up the good writing!