Adolescent - Comments

question him, if he says nothing, guilt trip him

I'm REALLY worried about this heart burn >.>
Even though u said he wasn't gona die I'm STILL worried of what can be wrong.
XD Guys and their tempers :') gotta love them.
Update soon please & ur other story... update when u can :P

Dear Hillari: please, question your father! Right now! Please?

I know that the suspense I feel with each update is probably my own doing, but it's good! Every chapter I wonder if this is it, you know? My brain has played this all out, naturally, so we'll see. But I still love the updates.

The interaction between the guys seems so real and that makes the story truly great. The guys are very accepting of Hillari and I think that's important. Well done!

Lol i just read the comment... i wasnt the only one that thought he was gona die huh?

Lol okay i feel better with u saying ur not that mean so... i dont think what i thought was gona happen is gona happen anymore... So update soon so i can know wtf is up with his chest.

Awe I loved it! :)

awww mushy moment :)
loved it!!!

Amazing, as usual :-)
I can't wait to find out what happens with Jimmy.
One favor, no dying. Pretty please?

loved the update. I'm now wondering what's going to happen to Jimmy.

This is going to sound creepy and stalkerish, but with the set up you've got going here, every email I get from Mibba makes me nervous, lol! But I was very excited to see this update and glad it wasn't bad news for our Jimmy. Yet.

I am glad that the adoptive parents are cool with him; I don't think that's always the case. I'm sure it's hard on him to have her call them mom and dad, but something tells me that, in time, she'll come around to the idea of him as dad. I'm just glad they're getting this chance to know each other and become close, because that's what's important.

Page claim :D

You're gonna make him die. But he just met Hillari! And you're gonna kill him. So as of right now I'm hoping that's not what is gonna happen and something else that's not as bad will happen. Now that that is stated I can't wait for more :)

oh my god, dont make Jimmy die please :(

Loved it! But I hope that nothing else goes wrong now. More soon, please?

I really hope he doesn't die. Loved the update.

What I want to have happen is a different version of what we all know happened: he gets the chest pain, he has the problems, but gets help in time. He goes into the hospital, his daughter talks some sense into him and they get more time to be together.

What I fear (and what usually happens): he dies. I hope he doesn't, but at this point, he's so happy that he deserves this time with his daughter; he just got her back...that shouldn't be taken away from him or her.

is jimmy gonna die??? cuz i dont want him to...

please update soon!

i was hoping it wouldnt happen, but hes gonna die of heart failure, or something along those lines.
damn i hope he sees alot more of his dughter just in case

Dont u dare do what i think your gona do! Jimmy ad an overlarged heart! dont do it! Do not do it please :(. Love the update though!

i loved it, and cant wait for more :)