Adolescent - Comments

Oh my gosh I am almost crying. Not many stories can do that to me. I love it and please don't stop writing.

If he breaks that promise...*shakes fist*

The way you wrote this was perfect. The tension was real, the emotions were real, and most people would take the news like they all did. Jimmy did the right thing by telling them all together, and I'm proud of him for doing so. I just hope that now the news is out, he takes good care of himself, no matter what that entails.

Hey it's P.L.K.A.F. I'm using my mom's account. I haven't been able to log in my account so I'm using hers.

Love what you've got going. I will fucking cry if Jimmy dies in this story. Not so soon after he's found his daughter. That's not right.

Anyways I'm back and I missed reading your story

I'm glad it's not that bad. I was starting to get scared then.
I hope he tells Hil soon. She's going to be devastated...
Please don't let him die =[ lol.
Xo

Aww. I hope Jimmy doesn't die. If he does, I am going to bawl my eyes out.

he needs to ring hillari's parents and tell them so they know, and then he needs to tell his daughter, before its too late

Okay so I just finally got caught up on like the last five chapters...and I'm really sorry for not being able to sooner! School just got way too crazy and I had to do this HUGE paper! But anyways, the chapters were great, and I loved them! More soon, please? Also, I really hope Jimmy is going to be okay...

If Jimmy dies.. I will fuckin spam you.

This is an AMAZING story!
Awww I hope Jimmy is going to be okay...
Update soon :)

I love it :)

I KNEW IT!
I KNEW ud give him an enlarged heart.
He had/has too much love NOT to have one :'(

So I kind of had a huge smile on my face when I saw you'd updated again!

I'm glad that Jimmy is doing treatment. It can help immensely and if his rhythm gets too out of whack, he can always have a pacer placed. That's a fairly common treatment for this AFAIK. It used to be, at least. It's a very worrying condition, because he's a ticking time bomb, but with treatment, he can live a very LONG life. I hope it all works out for him, I really, really do...I don't want Hillari to lose him now =(.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update sooooon!

Gahh I'm so worried right now about Jimmy
And are the guys and Hillari ever gonna find out about these doctors visits? I hope so
Can't wait for more :)

I absolutely LOVE this story!
But I have one problem with it...
Please don't kill off Jimmy =[ We love him too much.
Other than that, It is perfect =] I adore everything about it, from your writing style, to the way the characters have progressed! You have done a fantastic job.
Xo

Dude intense.. I do hope he's okay.
>.>
Is it an enlarged heart? :3
Hope not XD
Wait we had this convo already huh?
I just hope he's okay and tells Hill just so she'll know.

he needs to tell haillri

And there you go, making me all nervous and worried again! :P

Mayo is a GREAT resource and one that I've used myself in the past. The only other website that rivals it might be the National Institutes of Health website.

I hope that nothing goes wrong in the intervening days before you update again. I want him to get to this appointment and follow the orders he's given. If the doctor wants to admit him for testing, he'd better go. Because if he doesn't, I'll kick his butt all the way to the heart floor and hook up that damn monitor myself. I know how to hook it up *and* I know how to read the print out, too! *glares at Jimmy*

I'm a new reader but I caught myself up. I love it! Can't wait til the next post.

New reader, and I absolutely love it!!!
Suscribing :)