Too Good to Be True - Comments

HOLY COW MUFFINS! I really hate not having internet! Because(I just had to type that out about 10 times because I kept getting it wrong >.<) I suddenly get BOMBARDED with amazing epic awesomeness!!!!! P.S. My internet's back now.
And can you pass a message along to Derek? Tell him that I will come for him and I will make him suffer. I'll, I'll, I'll GRAWR! I'LL MURDER HIM! And then resurrect him and then kill him again! I will put him in Devil's Advocate Institution!!! GRRRR! I HATE HIM! Can I pretty please kill him?
But Frankie was so cute!! I was all like 'awwwwww!! I wants one!' XD Do you know where I can order my own Frankie?XD
I like Iona a lot. She seems really loyal and good to Hailz. I also like Mrs. Rye. She's good to Hailz and Tommy.
Is Hailz going to stay with Iona or is Frankie going to 'kidnap' her? (I accidentally wrote kipnad the first time XD) I want Hailz to go with Frankie on tour. Tommy can stay with Mrs. Rye can't he?
On another note, how's the date gonna go? Are they still gonna have it, what with Hailz in shock and all?
Anyway, I'm DYING for the next update. There honestly aren't enough words to explain how much I love your writing.
P.S. I finally thought of a killjoy name! Neon Angel! :D
<3

HEY! First of all, I made my 'promise'. I am writing this comment from a computer! :D hahah! I actually read it on my phone and then went over to my cpu to comment XD Anyways:
FRANKIE SAVED HER! OMG ashdjgjrfmjbghzeusjdkmhjbd. *happy-freakout-dance* I <3 Frank! Dude, this is so awesome! He just got there and hit Derek and refösdhu-! hahah! I'm freaking out a bit, no kidding! I'd love to leave like a really looooooooooong, beautiful comment but this chapter left me more or less speechless, plus it's like 8am and my brain is running a bit slow X) OMG I ALMOST FORGOT! :o That little note thingie, like the A/N, I mean I WAS IN THERE! *runs around squeeling* YEY YOU SHAZZY! You are truly the awesomest of them all! PUSS! (thats swedish for kiss gihi)<3

oh my holy shit! =O derek is a complete douchemonkey im glad frank an iona saved her from that prick i hope hailey's ok UPDAATTTTEE!!!!!!!!!!!

Woo Frankie to the rescue!!!

He saved her!!!
That just made my day!!
Awesome update!!
Can't wait for more!!

Yeah, i have great friends just like that
Grrrrr if i was Frank I would have like ripped his penis off and shoved it down his throat no joke. (my friend Sean told me to tell you that) but i was thinking something just as close

ohhhmyyyygoddd.
HE GOT HER >.<
so glad Frankie savedd herrr, Screw Iona.. Frankie's the super hero <3 LOL xx

omggg WHO WAS IT?

someone safe i hope D: x

Loved it!!!! I wonder who the creep is that was following her UPDATTTTTTEEEE!!!!!!!=D

omg is that Frank? Or Derek?
I think it's Frank. Am I right?
lol cant wait for more!

DUDE SERIOUSLY?! HE WAS FOLLOWING HER?!?! I mean noooooo!!! I'm having a heartattack due all this panic!! Like just STOP IT! LEAVE HER ALONE! Gdhdobxmgmhmk.
I hate him. Blaaaaaaaaaaah. Why can't he just go and sleep in a corner?! Hahah, god I'm like freaking out [dude. You are like my major freakout-factor! Wondering if that can be good.. :}]
Okay, I'm gonna leave Derek now ;)
So I absolutely L-O-V-E how Hailey and Tommy are together. She's so protective over him and he is just really sweet. I was SO sad when he got shit at home :'( but they're free now. OMG THEY. ARE. FREE! Fhgdsjjdpsksjhdhfj! I knew that before but it just kinda hit me just now.. Hahahah, I'm gonna stop now so that I won't freak you out.. Like I haven't done that yet x) hehehehe!
I'm really glad they have those people tho, Tommy's friend's parents! So nice that they just have SOMEONE!
Last thing now: WHEN WILL SHE MEET FRANKIE AGAIN? It has to be rly soon! Omg. Frank and the others should so come and beat Derek up! And save her like the gentlemen they are! And and and and MORE FRAILEY ACTION! I just made that name up right here and now ;D hahah!
Oh, btw next time I promise to write the comment from a cpu cause it's always so weird from my phone. And this thingie is like really long by now so I'm just gonna stop it xD So we'll just talk more later?! (A) Hugs and kisses ^-^ :* Love you Shazzy (do you know how much I love that nickname it's the awesomest ever!) <3 xxxxx

Derek was following her!!
Awesome update!!
More soon!

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!! I'm not online for a week and I miss two of the BEST FUCKING UPDATES EVER?!
My mind is going like...sha%^&%#$jhs*(Y^(8hkjUGigt8&gdjsgdfuivkdbvk o_0 o_____O
Just...WHOA! She stood up to her parents! YAY! And she and Tommy are FREEEE!!! Free like a birdie! Like a candy cane!...okay...that didn't make sense but oh well. I like candy canes so deal with it :P
What's Frank gonna say? :S Is he going to be all romantic and sweep her into his arms and save her and give her a home with him? He'd better not be an asshat >.<
Or is Gerard going to take them because he doesn't want Frank to impregnate her before she's 18?
Whoa, I just realised, if she's 17 then Frank's like...13 years older than her...pedo...XD Doesn't matter anyway, Frankie's cute enough ^-^
Is it going to be like a triple date or something?
YAY! I have Mikey's phone number! :P XD
MOAR! MOAR! MOAR! %) <---Drunk smiley :D
I can't never get enough of your writing...it's becoming an unhealthy obsession. I was even thinking about it for the past week. I was like...need...more...story.......want...internet...NAOS!!! Frankie....Hailey....MOAR!!! I was going kinda spazzy.
Anyway, this comment is long enough as it is.
Peace out! Happy Writing :D (happy/hyper reader ;D)

YAY she stood up for herself and Tommy!!
Awesome update!!
More soon!!

Morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre <3

Oh Shazzy. This is just amazing. And its so sad :'( I have tears in my eyes, for real. I [as always] got a bit crazy when I saw there was an update, haha! Sorrey for being so wierd! Anyways, I love how she stood up to her parents, I'm like go Hailey!!! And when she talked/thought about Frank. Just so cute *-* Can't wait for more! You know I love you! <3

OHAI DUDEEEE! is is just woah. I'm on my phone and suddenly it went like 'new email' blabla and then when i got on my mail I saw that it was a storyupdate notification thingie and I just kinda jumped out of my bed and nearly screamed XD gosh Im such a geek ;) I rly think this was a great chapter! And that date. Ahhhh man, srsly. It will be epicawesomeness!!! And oh, btw hyperness is officially my new favorite word. Just brilliant. That you for writing this. <3

GAH!!! I AM IN FUCKING LOVE!!! Update soon!?

Aw she and Frankie it's gonna be soooooo cutie!!
And again sounds like me and my best friends

OHMYGOD! SHE'S GOING ON A DATE WITH FRANKIE! *freakout* I can't wait for the next part. Oh gosh. Your writing is genious! And the whole "fight" between Hailey and Iona was just SO funny! As i said im like SUPER EXCITED for the next chapter and im sure i'll be great! cus you are fucking talented ;)<3 xxxxxx