She Can't Read Minds - Comments

Dude, I loved that chapter!!!!! The chemistry between everyone was awesome and natural and just....awesome! I think that's my fave chapter for the quality of writing, character development, and plot development. It was just awesome! Near the end it was a little hard to tell who was saying what, but other than that, great job!

I just started reading this and I fell in love with it hard.Like mad hard.
so I'm going to suscribe and I hope you update more (:

Damn, shit went down hard. lol oh and another thing, I LOVE CAL
haha he's adorable but they should just be best friends. They're going to be step-siblings anyway.
Unless they like incest, BUT that's a totally different story. haha
update ASAP.......

Okay. So the girls just fought because they were all feeling frustrated with Andi's situation, right? This isn't a permanent thing, hopefully. Did Bridgett just get mad because Andi was lying about it not mattering?

No. I flatly refuse for Miranda to have a bittersweet ending. FLATLY REFUSE!!!! Hmm...only a few more chapters, huh? She still needs to clear things up with Cal and I really hope Markus steps up because WE ALL KNOW HE LIKES ANDI, she just hasn't figured it out yet and you can't expect HER to do all the work and GAH!

Update sooooon! I promise to update tomorrow :)

wow. that was sufficiently...awkward...lol. Can't wait for more!

Is Cal getting jealous? Does he really want them to be more than just step siblings? Or maybe he's just upset because she hasn't bothered to straighten things out with him yet. Because he really shouldn't have any other expectations...I would think. Like I said, can't wait for more!

Markus was in the closet with her. Hoo, boy. What's she going to do about Cal? GAH! I'mfrustrated and confused for the girl, lol. GAH! I would not have the guts to talk to Markus. I'd just be like "let's just let this blow over..."

Is Markus going out with Nellie? Hmm...I don't think so. If he is, she must just be his "rebound-get-over-Andi chick." Which is a horrible horrible idea. Though I can see Markus letting it happen. But even if he were to "let it happen" because Nellie's just like "movies. Let's go." I doubt he considers them a couple.

I am on the edge of my seat waiting for your next update! GAHHH! *spazzes*

the person was markus, right?

I'm confused as to who was the person that was at the closet with her.

Wow. My last comment showed up twice.

Well, the chapter was only confusing in the sense that you didn't know who she had made up with. To me it seemed like Cal character-wise, but then that means her feelings for him are getting stronger which I honestly don't want to happen. In that case, the idea of "meaning it in a different way than you thought but I can't explain right now because it would be wrong," makes a little less sense because she really doesn't know why he thinks they kissed. Plus then the second to last sentence makes a little less sense.

With Markus some of what she says makes more sense. But I can't imagine Markus calling her "Rand-Rand" or acting as suave and at ease with the conversation. Stuff like not meaning what happened the way he thought she meant it makes far more sense, but the idea of not going to the movies with him again makes less sense unless she's still harping on the fact that Markus and Nellie are "going out."

So...it's either Cal or Markus acting somewhat out of character. It could also be Will, despite how ridiculously unlikely that is, because he's the only one in the story so far to call her "Rand-Rand." But then nothing else males sense.

I'm going to go with...Cal based on his actions and behaviors...I kinda hope I'm wrong but she did sit down next to Cal... Well, we'll see if I'm right soon, hopefully :)

The last scene made perfect sense don't worry! Good job :D

I'm really enjoying ittt :)

this is so good! can't wait for more =D subscribed <3

nope stunned me there

No. I definitely did NOT expect Markus to see them. Oh, Andi, Andi, Andi, what the hell are you going to do now? I'm glad she doesn't feel anything for Cal because even though I gave my blessing in my last comment, I still...I mean...come on! She and Markus are so much better than her and Cal. Cal is more like the amazing not-so-gay best friend who she just ended up...experimenting with. It would be awkward since they'll soon be siblings. Besides, poor Markus! Nellie does NOT deserve that awesome guy! Let us commenters fight over Cal ;)

If you didn't promise me you'd be posting through the weekend I would be dying right now. Anyway, update soon! <3

No. I definitely did NOT expect Markus to see them. Oh, Andi, Andi, Andi, what the hell are you going to do now? I'm glad she doesn't feel anything for Cal because even though I gave my blessing in my last comment, I still...I mean...come on! She and Markus are so much better than her and Cal. Cal is more like the amazing not-so-gay best friend who she just ended up...experimenting with. It would be awkward since they'll soon be siblings. Besides, poor Markus! Nellie does NOT deserve that awesome guy! Let us commenters fight over Cal ;)

If you didn't promise me you'd be posting through the weekend I would be dying right now. Anyway, update soon! <3

No. I definitely did NOT expect Markus to see them. Oh, Andi, Andi, Andi, what the hell are you going to do now? I'm glad she doesn't feel anything for Cal because even though I gave my blessing in my last comment, I still...I mean...come on! She and Markus are so much better than her and Cal. Cal is more like the amazing not-so-gay best friend who she just ended up...experimenting with. It would be awkward since they'll soon be siblings. Besides, poor Markus! Nellie does NOT deserve that awesome guy! Let us commenters fight over Cal ;)

If you didn't promise me you'd be posting through the weekend I would be dying right now. Anyway, update soon! <3

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! She needs to end up with Markus, not Cal, because he's going to be her stepbrother anyway, and that would be weird.

NO NO NO NO NO NO!!

Markusss!!! (love Cal as a person, but......MARKUSSS)

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What is happening?!? Dude! Seriously why did that just happen? Why the hell was he with NELLIE?! That chick should just go away! No one even likes Nellie!

Oh my...did they? DID THEY? 0.o

oh my gawrsh! i need more! you can't leave it hanging like that! that is torture! D:

OhMyGosh as of right now Cal is my favorite. He is so adorable! I wish he was real because if he was well I would want him as my boyfriend.

But I still want Miranda and Markus to end up together.