I love Cal. Absolutley love him. If Miranda doesn't get him in the end, then i'll take him. But seriously, I love your story I love Cal Post more. Like...NOW.
Oh my god you're going there! At first in the middle in the chapter I was like "hmmm. I don't think she'd go there." But you are!??!?!?!?!?
You know what's odd though? I watched this Asian drama where they let that happen. Essentially, they made it okay because when the parents found out they were supportive and the step-brother eventually was persuaded by his mom to move in with her instead of his dad and love interest. At first I was like "Whyyyyy?!?!?!?" but then I realized that it made their relationship more okay. So, as odd and weird and you may think I'm insane, I'd actually be okay with a Cal/Andi pairing if it was set up right. I mean, it's not really legit incest. It's just...odd.
On the other hand, I also love Markus. He's so amazing!!!!!! So...yeah. Markus first, and if it ends up being Cal...I might still be okay...
I'm glad you made Leslie so realistic. She didn't go all psycho-bitch and ditch her best friend because of one incident. I doubt Markus knows they're dating. I mean, he hasn't officially asked her out, I don't think...he seems like a really "go with the flow" kind of guy who doesn't have the guts to stand up to his sister or Nelly completely. He's probably too shy to tell Nelly to back off. Maybe at this point Andi will kinda-sorta confront him and say (calmly, I'm pretty sure she wouldn't yell at him for this) "dude, if you're dating a girl, don't ditch her for me. Not cool." and then he will be forced to choose between giving up Andi and standing up to those girls. Or Andi could give him up to save her relationship with Leslie...
I liked how you took a chapter for the cutness factor, a little bonding, and perhaps some forshadowing.
Also, I started a new story that I kind of want more people to look at. So, I was wondering if you would just check out. No strings attached. You don't have to critic or comment unless you feel compelled to. I just want you to look at it and see if you like it.
Ah! So adorable! I love that old couple and Markus is gahhhhhhh stepping up the game. They're too cute together. I wonder what Leslie and Nellie will say about this. kekeke
Oh! I found two little mistakes here. 1)it's "psych," not "sike"
2) the last paragraph, you put Miranda's and Markus' dialogue on the same line.
Oh, so I forgot to tell you last time but I was studying for finals and I get an email like "Oh, one of your subscriptions has been updated." And I was like "NO! STUDY!" and then I saw the words "She" and "Can't" next to one another. So I said "Meh, I can study in five minutes." You officially have me addicted ♥ Markus is so funny and adorable! And I think it would've been really adorable if the old man's name was Corey. Emma and Corey. Hmm...what does this remind me of? lol.
Ummmm predictions? Markus is either going to find her and wait for her to wake up so he can tease her (and them maybe fall asleep too so they both end up getting woken up by the janitors) OR he texts her and she forgot to turn her phone on silent so it BEEPS loudly enough for everyone around to hear. And then...idk.
@In the Moment thinks you should change the name. Idk...I kinda like it but that's because I was here pre-rewrite when the idea of Miranda "not being able to read minds" came up in the second chapter. So personally, I still like the idea. Haha. Remember Markust dancing around all adorably? I can't imagine Markus doing that now. Anyway, do what you want with the title. I still love it, but...yeah.
oh, and I give In the Moment props for reading all those comments before posting her own :)
i agree with worldclass i dont think leslie knew they liked each other and i think its odd that Markus just randomly gives upp. But i like that he THINKSs he can get over her and tries REALLY hard to(: Good Job on it(: Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :D
Gah! I see uber cute moments coming along!!!!!!! (this chapter was a little bit of a cute moment fail, but not much. But the movie idea makes it a total WIN!)
You updated so quickly, too! I've started betting with myself. Whenever I get an email from Mibba I'm like "what are the chances that it's She Can't Read Minds?" well, technically I started after chapter 2, but whatever.