She Can't Read Minds - Comments

WTFBBQ!!!

I always find it weird when my friend uses that phrase but I was so excited at the end of that double posting. DOUBLE POSTING *dies of happiness*

Awwwww! They're going to hang out! And I wonder is Will was going to say what I thought he was going to say...

A little of both! GAH! I'm squealing in delight already!!!!!

This is adorable. I adore it. The next chapter should be a little of both = ) Definitely subscribing.

Hmm...Cal hints that it's Belle, but I doubt a 18 yr old scratched him. She mustve thrown something?

Cal is just amazing!
This chapter actually made me laugh! :D
Keep updating!! :)

Cal is officially my favorite character. I'm beginning to think he's either to cool to be real or maybe, possibly gay. Though he does flirt, so...

LESLIE!!!! you little %~^€]£<*!!!!!! hopefully she has a reason for randomly ditching her 'friends'? A dispute or catfight or grudge of some kind...

huzzah! I love you for updating twice today ♥

that's true. Markus just thinks he can get over her. just a passing thought, who knows if he'll act on it.

I love Cal! He's so hilarious and adorable and just plain awesome! That date...lol. so funny! I wish I knew a guy who would do that.

Yay! I was waiting for your update :)

Why, Markus? WHYYYYYYY?

I don't think Leslie knew they liked each other. I mean, at some point it seems obvious, so she probably picked up on that. I'm pretty sure she doesn't know Markus liked Miranda because then I would expect her to push them together... because she doesn't seem the type who would forbid them getting together.

It does seem kinda odd that Markus is randomly give up...

Yay! another chapter coming up! So you're starting another story? I hope that doesn't mean you're leaving this one behind...

My first impression was that Nellie was just an extremely forward b*tch and I wanted to toss her out a window. But it's possible that Nellie was like "I like your brother" and Leslie was like "go for it!" and Nellie's like "I'm nervous" and Leslie's like "don't worry. ask him out and we can do a huge double date." It seems unlikely though. Nellie's just too confident for that to happen. Plus, I get the feeling that Leslie only gave up Griffin when she saw Andi making eyes at Markus.

Chapter 4

NOOO! Leslie isn't supportive! Oh well, at least she isn't thoroughly offended by the idea. She'll come around...eventually. Besides, this adds a little twist. Though have a feeling she likes Griffin more than Miranda ever would. What a friend to give up the guy for Andi.

Oh, and technically, it should be "be on my merry way" as opposed to "be on my marry way." Marry=vow of love between two people, merry=happy, jolly,etc.

Yeah, it is, i'll fix that.

I'm kind of confused as to who wants to talk to Andi, though. Is it Leslie?

GAH! so cuuuuuute ♥

Oh dear. I'm not sure I want to hate one of the old characters... Jane having a crush on Markus. haha. that's adorable!

Yay! Another update! Haha. It's okay to hate your own character. I just don't want the mom to hurt too much. Gah, Lucas! He's not as bad as I feared (yet), but I don't know what the mom sees in him. If he's a guy you like enough to bring home, shouldn't you already know he has kids? Especially if there's like 4 of them... And he's kind of a jerk to Will. I mean, Will wasn't exactly polite, but still...

I like this :)
I like characters :)
A few little errors but that's all right :)

Keep it up, I'm curious as what will happen.
I like the layout too.

I actually like the name Markus. It's unique without being "well, what were your parents thinking?" unique. When I saw "Lucas, her boyfriend" I was like "Noooooooo! Miranda can't have a boyfriend." then I was like "well it's okay for the mom." But now that we've met him I'm not sure I like him very much...I guess humorless strict men aren't really my thing, lol.

Haha, no prob. Unlike a lot of people on Mibba, I enjoy giving feedback as much as getting. I must say that the rewrite is AMAZING!! Keep it up :)

I love the rewriting and the new layout! And if you dare delete this story I will cry. Seriously.

Yay! Another update! Even though I've subscribed to a bunch of different stories, yours is the one I keep waiting for :) love this chapter!

really? I automatically assumed Markus was older than them...It's probably because I've seen WAY too many badly written "I've fallen in love with my older brother's best friend" stories on quizilla...

Hmmm, interesting....Markus sounds younger then them, like he's a kid with a crush on his older sister's friend...
Anyway, I liked the update and I guess I'll ask for an update soon? :D

Huzzah! And markus makes an appearance! I like his character already, I don't know why. And though I'd love to complain that this chapter is too short, it gets to the point. I like the characterization in this chapter better. The girls are listed chronologically so I get a better feel for who is who. On the whole a good chapter! Just a little short.