May 8th, 2012 at 06:18am
Manhattan - Comments
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Very well written! You have a way with words and I love the character of Jenner, gonna be selfish, i want more :)May 8th, 2012 at 05:15am
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This is a good story,but I wish you would check your word usage and spelling. You use the word "intern" when you should use"in turn". Intern means either confined(as in internment)or someone with an advanced degree working to gain practical experience. And I guess you meant scalper's instead of scallopers ln the summary page. I don't intend to sound mean, but these kind of mistakes are a story killer for me. The plot is a good one and you have good ideas...May 8th, 2012 at 05:15am
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Oh my god, I'm so happy this story is back! I was actually re-reading it the other day because it's so good and secretly hoping that you hadn't abandoned it. But, yeah, like I said, I'm really glad you updated. This story is such a refreshing piece of work, everything just flows together so smoothly. It's perfect! I can't wait to see what you have in store for this story. :)May 7th, 2012 at 11:06pm
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oh my god Sid...
love love loved the update!May 7th, 2012 at 08:04pm -
Glad to see youre back girlfriend!
Loved the update :)May 7th, 2012 at 03:36pm -
I'm so happy this is back!!!!!! Please don't disappear again!May 7th, 2012 at 03:24pm
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so glad you updated!!May 7th, 2012 at 12:41pm
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i would so kill him lol sun shine lolMay 7th, 2012 at 10:57am
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holy dear god do I love this story. I would name everything about it that makes it so great but it would literally be EVERYTHING. Please update soon!May 7th, 2012 at 10:20am
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I adore this story! I really miss it. Please update!May 6th, 2012 at 08:12am
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I just want to thank you. This is the most well written story that I have read in awhile. It's a great concept and moving at the perfect pace. Not to mention, it has all those details and internal monologues that most stories are missing. It's amazing. Please update soon? :)November 23rd, 2011 at 10:34pm
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when are you going to update this again???? its soooo good!June 9th, 2011 at 05:28am
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For the love of all that is good in this world, please update this magnificent story again soon!May 12th, 2011 at 08:28am
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Loving this story so far! hope you update again soon!!May 9th, 2011 at 07:05pm
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I love Sid and I love this storyApril 13th, 2011 at 11:47am
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I really love this :)April 6th, 2011 at 05:00am
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Love the story. Keep it upMarch 20th, 2011 at 02:18am
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i loved it! can't wait to read more!<3March 17th, 2011 at 05:37am
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That was too cute. 'Sidney and Manhattan wrote hugs and kisses to each other!'
I really like this story :DMarch 12th, 2011 at 03:08pm
but that was coot, man.
I love how Pascal was so nonchalant. "a hot 9 out of 10 babysitter."
I love you okay.
PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON!
I can't wait till Jen and Sid fall in love with each other and have kids and totally go against Jen's book.