Chasing Imagination - Comments

I began reading the Dreamers books a week and a half ago and fell in love with them so I think it's time I gave you some much deserved feedback on each one!

Chasing Imagination had me hooked from the start! What amazed me most is that this is not a sci-fi story, something which is usually essential for me. There was no magic at play and yet Amy's pre-Dreamer life was so alien that at one point, I forgot that it was simply a distant future, with real people and set in London, somewhere I've even been myself.
Once I remembered, I became increasingly unnerved at the idea of a government who managed to take the "human" out of "human race."

Another part of your writing that I loved was how you seamlessly weaved the romance with the action and suspense. I suspect the Dreamers series wouldn't be nearly as successful without your brilliant descriptive skills and your talent for writing action and creating a tense yet believable atmosphere. Something I am quite envious of!

This is a great story. I enjoyed it alot. Your descriptions are fantastic and I love the characters. Your writing style inspires me. I can only imagine what life would be like if imagination were banned.This is incredible. You are most certainly a fantastic writer. Great job.

I'm on Chapter Twenty, and I love it so far, I just felt compelled to point something out.

There is more to music than rock, more to styles than punk. If you'd ever kind of relook over this, I would suggest adding a couple people who aren't little punks. Maybe wild tops with different colors that are kind of...preppy I guess is the word I'm looking for...that wouldn't be okay in society, but would be for a Dreamer. There are more to it than that. (:

Awesome story, BTW.

Holy fracken crow! I only just read the first chapter and I feel I must keep reading. This is hands-down the best story I've read on here thus far. I can just imagine a world like that and how incredibly hideous it would be. No imagination? Ouch, talk about putting people like us out of the job. Great job I can't wait to read more! XD

This is truly amazing ad fascinating. One of the first stories on Mibba that feels like a real book while reading it. I read it in a day and a half, not letting anything distract me. I'm sure the second book will be also great- I'm going to find out in less than a minute:D
Oh, I also found the 30 Seconds to Mars references/quotes awesome :D Some may have been accidental but they still warmed my heart :)

Hello. I didn't know this story existed! But I've been to the "Write Away" writing contest on the Forums, read that you'd finished your story and I thought, "Why not check it out?" And guess what? I FELL IN LOVE with your summary! The story sounds promising, so I'm subscribing to make sure that I'll read it some time soon! I'm working on something - that makes me exhausted, tbh - but as soon as I'm finished with it and I've got more reading time on my hands, I shall be reading this :D It's a promise.

i was in love with this book since day one and you never disappointed me. i totally agree with the comment above about making this a published book and there is this website called: inkpop.com and the books that become popular on it get read by professionals and if they think it is good enough to publish then work with you and send your story into a company and while your trying to get popular , people on inkpop edited your work and give you tips so you can go to the top and be noticed,,,,,now i am off to read the sequel which i know is just going to blow my mind. =D

This story is AMAZING! So original; so unique. Along with that, it's well written.
I can honestly say this is probably the best original story I've ever stumbled across on this site. I could actually see this story as being a published novel. Group some of the chapters together so there's not quite as many and send it in to a publishing company. You never know! ;)

Well done on this; it's beautiful.

Haii! I am currently on chapter 37 and I just have to say that I am absolutely, positively infatuated with your story! I read alot of books and to find a story here written by someone who is not a published author that is as amazing as any other famous book that I have read is absolutely amazing. I would not be suprise to see you become a famous writer someday! Keep up the great work and never stop writing!

this story has me on my edge and i cant wait too know what happens next! i like the way your are writhing it, and the way its going, i was not expecting that at all the way the cops found there base and stuff, maybe i was getting way to used too story you always know were they are heading but i can not tell whit this one, maybe im stupid but i like the change! so i am subscribed and can´t wait to read more :]

‘Get to Berlin,’ he whispered. ‘Tell them what’s happened. And start a fucking revolution.’ - This story is amazing and well on its way to become a novel (: Keep writing! It feels like its just beginning x

this story is getting really intense right now. its amazing. cant wait for your next update!!

This is SUCH a good story! Please update again soon!! I can't wait to see what happens. :) Fantastic job!

This story is so amazing, I would actually buy the book at a store. :) it sort of reminds me of The Host meets The Hunger Games. I can't wait for the next chapters, I am entirely captivated. He language that you use if very descriptive and easy to read. You make it seem as if the story is real and I've fallen in love with your characters. It's great that they are a different and have their own flaws, it makes them more realistic. Anyway, I'll stop ranting now and go do the homework that I've neglected all day to read this. Update again soon :)
Xxx

ohhh that sucks....they need to become friends again.

all i could say at the end of this was WOW.... Casper blowing up at Amy, i never saw that coming but it worked amazingly. loved it!

Hah. *I am now a faithful reader, is what I meant.

This story really has me hooked. I can't tell you how tired I am of reading stories around here where the girl and the guy get together within three chapters despite any tension or anger between them. Yours progresses at the right pace, just as an actual book would. I would really encourage you to try getting this published. I know a lot of people would love this. :)
Great job. I am not a faithful reader.

one of the few stories on mibba that i like