Chasing Imagination - Comments

Oh my god, this story is just like... wow. I've never read of something so original. And this story is so incredibly well-written...it sounds like a book I'd read in real life. Speaking of that, if you're really into writing, you could totally consider trying to get this published, even though the story isn't even at its peak. This story is freaking incredible, and it's only at the sixth chapter. Please update again soon.. and frequently; I want to read as much of this as I can <3

Nice update (: I completley agree with Amy's choice. I'm interested to see what happenings next and how she'll take to being a dreamer or what she'll even have to do as a dreamer. I liked the line: "I’d always been good at reading people; sometimes too good". It was a nice insight to Casper's character and I wonder if there's some bad history there due to his reading skills...? Anyway can't wait for more, update soon! x

Loved it. Keep going!

Nice update (: Is glad that Amy has chosen to be a dreamer. Their government sounds so stupid it makes you wonder what our real future will be like... Update soon can't wait for more! x

This story is great! I love the concept of the Dreamers. Please, please keep writing more! :]

Wow! What an explosive and engaging way to start a story. Though I have to confess I fell in love with this story from your summary (: The idea of imagination being forbidden is really intriguing, a real unique concept. I love your style of writing how you develop Amy Potter as a character as someone who accepts the rules and obeys them simply because she always has but is also willing to give in to her curiosity. I love how things like music is banned and people are not allowed to choose their own houses. It really creates the claustrophobic atmosphere of a world closely controlled by the government, yet you also give reasons why people would ban imagination, because things like individuality and ambition does give to rise to discrimination and bullying. I like Casper as a character he seems genuinely sincere. I think I can guess which choice Amy will make (: nevertheless I can’t wait to see how this story plays out. I’m surprised you don’t have more comments because I my opinion this is a story of real quality and you should definitely continue because you are an amazing writer. Update soon!

i really love this story. its so sad that she can't leave. but she'll probably start liking it soon. she already has curiosity down and she was kinda dreaming about being a teacher,plus she did lie to casper at the start.SHE DIDN'T LIE GOOD( I WAS LAUGHING WHEN SHE SAID LIEING WAS FUN),. UPDATE SOON~

OMG... that was amazing. if that really happened i would totally be on the rebel side. its so sad that they cannot dream or imagine anything. and how that old man pitched his idea to his friends and one of them told on him that sucks. CANNOT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!!!!! :D