Bettering The Bruises - Comments

I hope puck beats the shit and fuck outta Finn and then Jenna has like a little mean streak and gives him an extensive verbal beating (in less nicer words cusses him out)

TEAM PUCK ALL DAY!!!!!

Team puck! :D

Love it!!
And team puck!!

I really hope you update soon:)
love this Story!

Melissa..
you continuously surprise me ;]
It didnt really occure to me that Quinn and Jenna would be friends but im glad that they are :)
I really cant wait to see how the hole Puck vs Finn thing goes :') So update soon okay?

i just started watching glee..i bought the whole first season and went through all of it in 2 days...your story makes me like it even more:) keep it up!

This story is so good:) and Glee is freakin amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Update soon Please:)

The plot thickens! Lol but this is really good and has the potential to become something amazing by epic proportions

Mibba wouldn't let me post a comment, so here I go again. XD
Great update. :D Woo!
I love how Jenna and Finn are still together. That's pretty cute.
Although I have a feeling that them being a couple will start some drama.
Stoked for the next update!

Jenna is so naive. Ha-ha. I like that she and Quinn are friends. :) Great chapter! I love Puck and Jenna's dynamic together. But I'm not choosing sides because I'm simply super indecisive. :D And gracias for the shoutout!

And you deserve more comments! COMMENT, PEOPLE! Of course, they won't see that unless they're coming here to comment...so...um...*cough* Yeah, I tried to help. I'm done ranting now. :)

i love that you made quinn nice to jenna and not a bitch, love the story! SHOUT OUT!

aww she's dreaming about puck! thanks for the SHOUT OUT!

:o having dreams about Puck while Finn's sleeping in the same room?
I can tell things are gonna get complicated ;]
but what makes a better story than complication? xD

i loved the updates so so so much!!!!
the whole thing with the police and her mom is craaaazy!
and i love how her and finn are together!
and i think she is much better off with finn than puck!
although both of them are gorgeous... <3
great job on the chapters!
sorry i didn't get to them faster! :P

Finn's so sweet, but I'm still team Puck. Just because. <3 I have a feeling Jenna's gonna end up with him.
I loved this chapter, it was great, keep it up!

Omg, omg omg omg OMG. I'm so freaking in love with this.
I've been like on the edge of my chair reading this.
Seriously, update update update. SERIOUSLY.
Ahhhhhhh! :D
I'm team Finn because they're cuter together. However, Jenna is lucky that this is just a story because Finn is mine. ;) lawlz.
Amazing story. Ahhh, I need more. I'm thinking about re-reading it. Bwahah. You're an amazing writer. Ahhh, amazing. :D :D
*deep breathes*

Awww. I feel badly for Finn, since he's being so sweet, and it's kinda clear that Jenna likes Puck more. :( That dream was well-described. Great chapter! Can't wait for more. :D

Alright, so I pretty much devoured this. ahah. I'm not that surprised of how popular this story is because if it's anything, it's not boring. You're definitely constantly keeping me on my toes and making me wonder what'll happen next.

I like the main character, she's extremely likable to me. She's sort of shy and timid but seems like a really great friend, the way that she comforts Finn when he found out that Quinn had cheated on him with Puck. That, and how without even knowing Kurt that well, she was still not pleased that Puck was throwing him in the trash can. It shows a lot about her character. And the way that she treats her sister is really cute.

And, plus, even though she tries, she still messes up. Which makes me like her more. Her kissing Puck, yeah, people sometimes don't think. It's realistic.

I like how you put focus on the relationship with Mercedes too, I feel like not enough stories ever really do that with friendship, it's just perfect all the way through because the romantic storyline forces it to take a back seat. Having that she's caught up with everything and ignoring her , I'd be damn surprised if Mercedes wasn't pissed at her- it really fits her character well.

I like Puck and Finn's characters too, you've done a good job with them, I think. I like being able to say that because most fanfiction I don't know much about, but I actually watch Glee.

If anything, I just think everything moved incredibly fast. In the first chapter, it's like we're thrown right into the middle of the story. I'd really like to learn more about their relationship beforehand, I think that would make this story have a much bigger impact. I suggest maybe writing a prequel? That way you can still continue from what you have here, but the background is set up. And as it progresses, days are passing and so much is happening. After a week or so Finn's already confessing his feelings for her, just after breaking up with long time girlfriend Quinn, and letting her move in with them? Even though filler chapters seem pointless, they help the story build in my opinion, and you're sort of jumping from one drama to the next.

Other than that, though, it is a really good story. I really wonder what Jenna's going to do to fix things with Mercedes and how it's all going to work out. :D

Though I didn’t have a huge amount of cash, I had some.

I like how realistic this line is, aha.<33 Like, she's not some incredibly rich chick or something. It makes me happy. :D

strange looks on there face.

There should be their*. <3

“Please calm yourself.

Even though this was an incredibly serious conversation, I found myself giggling at that line, aha. <33

He sighed, “Quinn’s pregnant.”

Dun, dun, dun. <33

Do I even need to tell you how amazing you are? I think you just like hearing me say it. (;

So I shall!(: You're really and truly amazing, missy. I love reading your stories. I'd have to say you're one of my favorite authors on here, fer sure. <33

Keep up the amazing work. :)

This is good, but I want some more Kurt and can mercedes and jenna fix things please?