To Yonder - Comments

I really, really love this story. It's just so amazing. And awesome. Did I mention awesome? You're doing a great job. There's just one thing that's bugging me personally though. If the captain is so smart how can he not put two and two together? I mean, the princess somehow wasn't on the ship and he was wondering where she could have gone, and then they find out that the two guys were actually girls. How could it not even cross his mind that one of them might be the princess? It just kind of bugs me.
But...
I understand why you took the course of action you did, because if you had made him figure out right when the story started that she was the princess the story probably wouldn't have been as cool...So I understand why and the story being exciting kind of makes up for it in my mind. :)
Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

I loveeee this so far it definitely deserve more comments :D:D can't wait for another update :)
*subs* !

welll....its obvious to Will and Tanek that THEY ARE WOMEN now...soooo....you could start a little romance with tanek and Alessia ;) hint, hint; nudge, nudge
and I TOTALLY THINK THAT TOOTHY HEARD THE BIT ABOUT ALISTAR (sorry if I spelled his name wrong) BEING HER BROTHER!!!
I caught onto that bit of foreshadowing XD I just dont know exactly WHO heard else heard it
annnd eventually Tanek will find out shes the princess...but I think Will should first lol
and your getting better at making the chapters more eventful and/or ending them in a solid way...buuut I still kind of feel like some of the chapters are just....lacking something
DO NOT GET ME WRONG....I LOOOOVE THIS STORY
I'm just trying to help get more people to adore it :) haha
It also could be that I always find the really good stories with mega long chapters, so Im not used to a really good story/one with lots of promise to have such "short" chapters
but anyways, keep up the fantabulous work! Love the frequent updates :)
lots of love,
Erin Grace

I would miss home too much. Haha. Taneks gonna feel so stupid when he realizes Alec was Alessia all along. Update soon!!

Woa you updated! Yes! I love this lol. Update soon
Marie

Wow. I'm surprised her brother didn't recognize her. But then again whhat would happen in the story if he did?

Oh!
And I adore the Hush Sound. :)

And your author notes entertainment me.

I've found my newest addiction.
:)

I love how original this is. It helps that I love pirates as well.

One question I have is how did Will find out that Nelly is a girl?
:x

Will is my favorite character so far. :)

i am totally loving this story. but how the heck did he not know its his sister?!

Why does everyone leave cliffhangers!!!!! It's killing me. haha. Please Update soon!!!

Amazingness :)

Update as soon as possible! Can't wait to see what"s next
Marie

Awesome Update. Must be pretty hard on Tanek on that day.
Can't wait to read more so update soon!!!

love this story, can't figure out who's my favorite character yet! update soon can't get enough of this story!!

I love this story. The originality is brilliant. The characters are quite amiable. The plot is great. All in all, its great. However, on occasion I have come across grammatical mistakes. Perhaps rereading the chapters would help get rid of those. Otherwise this story is great. I subscribed.
Marie

ahh I love Tanke and Will :) *sigh* who do i love more is the question here though lol even though its obvious she's going to end up with Tanek XD
I just started reading the story when I stumbled upon it on your last update under original fiction (thats where all the best stories are dont cha know) and am in love!
I haven't read many Pirate fiction but what I have read I love, and you are thus far upholding my love for them! one thing though, if you could try and make chapters a little longer? I feel as if the are ending with out anything actually happening in them or I feel like they end to soon, just when I'm REALLY getting into it....its over
otherwise no complains besides a few minor spelling and gramtical errors (not that I'm one to say anything lol)
update soon :)
lots of love,
Erin Grace

Awesome Chapter. Its great getting to know about the characters. Update soon!!!!

Awesome story. It is really good and I hope to read more ASAP. I can't wait until she tells him who she really is. That'll be epic. Update Soon!!!!! :D

This is pretty awesome.
Looking forward to the next update.

I am quite enjoying this story. Its very well written and I quite like where its going. Please post more soon =)