After the Sun - Comments

NOaH YOU BITCH WHERE ARE YOUG OING

Wow, this is amazing! It's such a unique plot and I've never read an apocalypse story like this so it's incredibly refreshing to me! Your descriptions are excellent and the characters are so well rounded to me. Also, I love the layout and your banner is amazing to me! :D
I watched the story trailer, too, and it was breathtaking!
Even the prologue was epic to me, and the author's note made me laugh when you said the next time it would be deleted it would be because it'd be a hard copy. I'm sure that you can do it because this such an amazing story! :D
Keep up the great, amazing job on this story!!

okay now I'm just a little bit confused LOL

I'm here to deliver the last part of your Valentines treat!

I haven't seen anything like this on here at all. It's such a unique take on an idea that seems to have been over-done on this site. I've seen zombies and explosions and the suchlike being out in stories with the Mayan predictions, but never vampires. I love the idea of the sun going out completely. I think that's such an original idea, and a fantastic one at that.

Your description throughout is really good as well. This story has more of a personal air to it, like I'm seeing into the thoughts of Annabelle and Noah without the story being narrated by them, and I think that's really interesting.

I really like this as well, and you certainly have a fantastic writing style. This idea is unique and fantastic, and I think you can do great things with it. Keep up the good work!

This idea seems so unique and a very interesting take on vampires. The summary was so intriguing and so nicely written and the banner is very cool by the way.

You have excellent descriptions and it all flows so nicely.

The concept of this story is very interesting, I like it.

aw Annabelle girl :c you really are super naïve

lulz now I kinda think it's hilarious how Annie's like, "you were human" because it's like bitch what else could he have been, a rhinoceros?
but omg now I notice how kind of two-faced Noah is

I would like to make you a trailer for this... although you already have a trailer.

PM me if you want one?

ugh this still rouses the shock it did before

AND THEY OFFICIALLY MEET ALL OVER AGAIN UGH THIS IS WONDERFUL

this is dramatic all over again

YESSSSSSSS THEY MEET AGAIN
shit's going down

he fell to the floor
Billie you really have a thing for driving me crazy
and kind of making me distraught
and and yeah

that one liner at the end tho
that was so perfect

I'm actually still kinda excited for you to be rewriting this LOL

next one please :) just read the whole thing so far and i love it. cant wait on the next one :) have fun writing :)

I hope they all make it out in one piece, especially Jacob.
I'm started to like him again, I feel like I'm bi-polar when is comes to this character. Hopefully Noah comes and saves the day.
YES PLEASE UPDATE SOON .... I'm dying to find out what happens next!!

I hope they all make it out in one piece, especially Jacob.
I'm started to like him again, I feel like I'm bi-polar when is comes to this character. Hopefully Noah comes and saves the day.
YES PLEASE UPDATE SOON .... I'm dying to find out what happens next!!

OH MY GOD NOW I WANT TO CRY IF JACOB GETS HURT
HE'S GONNA SACRIFICE HIMSELF FOR ANNIE AND UGH
I think I'll cry.
d00d.
this story takes me on sUCH a rollercoaster of emotions that I just cannot control.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.<3

I'm so happy I stumbled upon this story. It's beautifully written and I'm in love with the plot! Ugh. Must see some Noah romance soon! Please update.