After the Sun - Comments

UGH BILLIE Y U DO DIS 2 US
you're killing me here, I swear.
I feel so bad for Annabelle, everything she's ever known is gone, and the only thing she has left is Noah :c
BUT THAT'S OKAY
CAUSE HE'S NOAH, SO
AND THERE'S STILL THE POSSIBILITY HE COULD LOSE CONTROL AND EAT HER
or fall in love with her
but I wouldn't know.
update soon? c;

Yet another remarkable update, gurrrlll you have some serious skills. :P

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO EMOTIONAL
I WAS HOLDING ON TO EVERY WORD.
I really can't comprehend how amazing this is.
my body's just not capable of that function.

Ammmazing update looking forward to the next one!:)

WOW, I am astounded by your writing. You had me engaged the entire time, I think this story is my new obsession. Please oh please update soon!

NOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Y U ALL PRO/ANTAGONISTTTTTTTTTTT
seriously I am dying okay
really



DYING
it's like, "hey Noah why don't you just turn yourself into a knife and sTAB ME IDC BECAUSE YOU'RE KILLING ME"
god dammit.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

HOLY SHIT
god this chapter makes me want to cry
especially with those flashbacks and Noah's recollection
god dammit why is this so perfect

Noah's scaring me so much, holy shit.

OH MY GOD AKSDJHFLKAJHSDCKLJHAWLKEJFHAKLSJDFCLKAJSHDFLKJHALWKJSDF
NOAH Y
Y NOAH Y
HOLY SHIT.

This story is great! Update soon!

awesome story!!
Update soon please !

This story is amazing, you're such a atlented writer. c:
I didn't read this when you had it up before, but now you've brought it back and I'm so happy. :) I'm hoping you're planning to update this soon, because you've got me wondering what exactly Noah is and gah. I have enough feels, woman!

This is a great story and it's truly amazing. You're writing is great and I wish mine could be as great as yours! The plot is really interesting and everything falls into place perfectly.

maybe Jacob isn't as bad as I had perceived.
I actually quite like him in this chapter (:
please update soon!

oh my GOD THAT WAS SO SCARY.
freaking Jacob, scaring the shit outta Annabelle and killing everyone.
I hate him.
WHERE'S NOAH WHEN SHE NEEDS HIM. D:
anywho, please update soon :c
I'm so sad this story is ending but it will FOREVER BE IN MY SUBSCRIPTIONS. yeah.

LOVE.

Sorry it took me so long to comment! I read up to chapter 7 (and I plan on reading more!)

First off, I really like this! The layout is really beautiful and simple and all the banners are lovely. I'm loving your character choice as well. Mila is just gorgeous! And don't get me started on Jensen Ackles!

I love the setting of this wreaked/dystopian nation. I like how you don't have to explain what everything is for, it leaves the reader to think. You're a great story teller, because I can tell you, I will watch dystopian/apocalyptic movies (rarely) but I don't usually read stories like this. I was fascinated by how the world came to this. I like the subtle details in the community. The human nature surely turns cold, almost heartless when they're thinking about survival. I really like the twist in chapter five. I don't know what I expected Noah to be, but, not human.

I really liked Noah's story of Jacob. It's going to be so heartbreaking for Annabelle! This has gotten me really pumped to read this, hopefully I'll be able to catch up next week lol.

I like your characters because the seem natural. Through Annabelle's narration, I can get a glimpse of her life, I can't understand it as we're obviously in different settings, but her voice is raw. And do I sense a future romance with Noah?

i really like this :D
update soon please

ohmygawd that was fantastic
that was just beautiful
I loved it so much.
she's starting to love the blood oh my god
please update soon?

OH MY GOD
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I'M SO SCARED RIGHT NOW, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW LIKE HOLY SHIT
OH LAWD.
please update soon!