Telescope Eyes - Comments

reagan, huh? is that a call out at me to do something right for once? I hate addison. and i hate the name. I hate her stupid face and I don't even know her. Eric... is kinda sweet and cute in that pathetic way that he's always going to lose... and despite john being a dick - she left him. granted, with good reason, but she left him. and he's an idiot for going back to that slut addison. but that sluts also got no self respect to take someone back after and hour of another people being gone... fuck... it's 430 in the morning and I'm legit digressing this. love you.

Is it even a question whose team I am on?

i've decided that i agree with you on the fact that john was a douche this chapter.
so, since i'm a bit angry with his behavior, i've changed my mind.
TEAM ERIC. <3
well.. until john stops being a punk :P
and, to that question, i think john does love her. deep down, he's just jealous of halvo and his amazingness. :) bahaha, and i'd enjoy it if addison got punched. ;)
i love this& you are wonderful for updating! :)
♥analeise.

I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeallly do not like Addison. I mean I didn't like her last chapter either but geez I already can't stand this girl. I absolutely love Eric<3

I just read what you have so far, for the first time, today. And it's amazing <3 I'm definately team Eric though :P

Hot damn. This just keeps on getting better and betterrr. Love this story. :3

Lucia is a dumb bitch. I hate her. I hate old people in general.
People should live until they're unable to reproduce and then they should die.
And in the last chapter I can't belive they almost banged!!!!
I'm team Eric for now. He's adorable!

Oh my God, I love this story. It's so adorable! At first, I wanted Micah to be with John because y'know, John is a studmuffin. ;) But, I love Halvo too, and I think he and Micah are perfect together. So yeah, I'm definitely Team Eric, for now. Oh, and Lucia is a wench and should've been back-handed or something.

Update soon! <3

Team Eric! This is an amazing story and I can't wait to read the rest! <3

first off, i wanna start off by saying that i LOVE your story. :D
and secondly, team john, all the way!<3

well, well, well... look who's seriously dominating these updates. I mean, no biggie or anything. And John and Micah are totally in love and that stupid slut Addie needs to get punched. ASAP.

AWW John is so in love with her, I just know it!!! AHHH TEAM JOHN!!!!

Oh my god!! How cute! Its really hard for me to pick a team. I mean Micah and John were like that then. John is with Addison and Halvo has been there for Micah. They could have been but it wasn't meant to happen or who knows. So I am Team Halvo. He really loves her and they have a little boy. I would like to see how things would go if Micah and John were to give it a try now that they are older though. That would be interesting. Well I hope you update soon:)

I want to be Team Halvo but John is so adorable... I don't know haha!

Team eric!

I just started this and I've just now finished all of your posted chapters. I LOVE IT.
I want to be Team Eric so badly, but I can't help loving John. GAH I am so conflicted.

I love this story! It's brilliantly written and so heart rendering. More please! :)

TEAM ERIC.

I'm still team Eric even though this chapter almost made me switch over to team John. John and Micah seem like they just have that natural chemistry but Halvo's so sweet and nice. I'm a bit conflicted but for now I'll say team Eric (this will probably change chapter by chapter though haha).

I don't know what to say about this. I love it, I really do, and it's leaving me speechless haha. I just hope that things with John don't get out of hand.