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  • peaceoflondon

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    I love this story, especially this chapter : )
    Eric's a good dad, but I think they should stay friends.
    Her and John have such good chemistry. Team John for sure.
    July 6th, 2011 at 05:27pm
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    This chapter was... wow! I can't choose between John or Halvo just yet, but great chapter!
    July 6th, 2011 at 12:06pm
  • ineedacatchyname

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    Oooooh naughty naughty :]
    Team both!
    July 6th, 2011 at 11:57am
  • deanna13

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    Aw I loved this
    chapter! This story
    is seriously becoming one
    of my favorite stories. I can't wait
    for the next chapter:)
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:19pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I know you haven't asked yet but....I'm definitely team Eric. He' just so adorable, a good father to Colton, and so sweet to Micah. I loved how Eric dressed Colton like himself and how he stood up for Micah when Lucia was be rude and out of line.
    P.S. I think that Eric should get Micah in this story and John should get Peyton in Learn to Fly. That way both of them win (even though it's 2 completely different stories and characters). hahaha
    July 4th, 2011 at 10:46pm
  • n1aller

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    Love, love, love this story!
    July 4th, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • harrystyles

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    i love this story so much. seriously, SO much. i can't wait for every update and get so excited to see the e-mail when i get one. keep up the awesome work! :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Baking cookies when your mom was storing water? hahahahaha I love you. And I love this chapter. It's so cute! And that Lucia lady is a bitch. But really. This chapter is my favorite so far. I am partially speechless, basically aside from everything else I said hahaha.
    July 4th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • myfacehidesall

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    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!! i am BEGGING you!!
    July 4th, 2011 at 04:54pm
  • unlove

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    Why do I feel like Halvo isn't Colton's real father? idk idk idk.
    Very pretty layout by the way :3
    July 4th, 2011 at 12:52pm
  • Lucille Ball.

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    halvo, you keep your slutty scene kids hands off micah. she's fucking taking you fool.
    July 4th, 2011 at 10:35am
  • thescenekid

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    Halvo's so adorable!!!! Ah, I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for being fast with the updates, I really like this story. :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 10:22am
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    This chapter was really good! I love how Halvo stood up for her, it shows how great of person he is. Really can't wait for another chapter :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 09:42am
  • ineedacatchyname

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    OH MY GOD I LOVED IT. For real this is my favorite chapter like ever. I absolutely cannot wait for the update :]]]
    July 4th, 2011 at 08:56am
  • dream.forever

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    This is such a good story I can't wait to see how everything turns out. And now the Micah and Halvo are together..humm...Can't wait for the next update!
    July 4th, 2011 at 08:38am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    damn halvo told that lady off
    this story is really great, i can't wait for another update
    July 4th, 2011 at 08:36am
  • disappearing act.

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    Lalala loooove. I love your mom, too hahaha
    July 4th, 2011 at 08:26am
  • thescenekid

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    Awwww I love this story! Can't wait for more!
    July 3rd, 2011 at 06:11am
  • beccuh

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    i like this story!
    keep going!
    update soon!
    July 3rd, 2011 at 05:26am
  • BUSTANUT

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    So I have to tell you that this is an amazing story. You've always been such an amazing writer. I loved all your other stories and this one is no exception. It's really hard to find a good story sometimes and this is amazing. I can't wait to read what else you have in store! (:

    Also, the whole scalp getting sunburned suckssssssssss man. I always get sunburned on the top of my head and then it fucking peels and i feel fucking disgusting. Random thought hahahaha
    July 3rd, 2011 at 12:35am
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