Telescope Eyes - Comments

Eric is so cute. I feel like their mini conversation about underdogs is a bit of foreshadowing. John's dumb for not taking a chance and falling for Micah. Also, I don't think you sounded like a douche about the comments. I totally understand where you're coming from. I hate asking for comments too but sometimes I get so annoyed and say "screw it." and hint that I need more comments lol. So please, please don't give up on this story because I love it.

Here is your SEVENTH comment for this chapter. Be patient, child.

I think that John is stupid if he thinks that Micah would break his heart and Addison wouldn't.
Micah seems a lot sweeter than Addison and I don't even know that much about her.
But, Eric is really good for her so it's alright.
Update soon!

pretty sure you plagiarized that whole chapter from my actual life, slut.

but... way to update, love you.

Eeep I love giraffes<3 and this chapter of course. Eric and John are adorable

I absolutely adore this story! Very interesting and unique, updates please! :)

This chapter was real cute, i think it's good to see how they started out and stuff. Hope you update soon!

Aw, this was incredibly cute! John definitely liked (likes?) Micah, possibly as much as or more than Halvo does. I love Micah and Halvo already, but it's so sad to see John liking her this much! And I feel bad about Micah's dad. At least she's got friends to take her mind off of him! And I absolutely love how childish John and Halvo were being hahahaha. I love this.

I thought that Micah and John dated but it doesn't seem that way since he has a girlfriend of 7 years and Micah talked about how it would just complicate things. So if they didn't date I don't see why she and Eric just couldn't tell John about Colton. I'm sure you'll tell us why eventually though lol

I <3 Eric.

It seems like John is really tired and bored with Addison. Just the way he said seven years. Seems like there are still feelings for Micah, and don't tell me there aren't, it really seems like there are! I love this whole family thing with Micah, Halvo, and Colton. I think it's just so adorable! And what in the world was Micah's mistake that made her run away?! Was it sleeping with John? Sleeping with Halvo? And Halvo really is Micah's dad right?! gvfresoihgf this is all just so confusing but all so good!

I really want her to tell John about Colton :(

halvo needs to back off... i know you're all lovers of him, but i don't trust him enough to not love Micah. Let's be real - Micah and John are perf. Don't you dare threaten that, woman.

Aww, adorable!
I think I officially like Eric more than John right now.
And Colton is so cute.
Update soon!!

I'm really excited about this story :D

cool story, bro.

wow. it's like a whole new world. ;) you know I kid. plus, you know I love it. DUH

I loved how this chapter showed how Micah met John and Eric. I think the look John gave Eric was a "back-off, she's mine" look lol

Aww, this is adorable.
I think John will like Micah more, but Eric will be more forward about it, so she'll go out with him.
Obviously she bangs him.
Update soooon!

hahaha at Halvo's wink to Micah. If only they knew what would happen in the future (or what I think it is, I couldn't tell, but whatever) I found John and Micah's connection really cute too! And THANK YOU FOR SHOWING WHAT VEGAS IS REALLY LIKE! IT'S TRASHY, AND ICKY. Anyways, I loved how John already inviting her to go karting. I love this chapter!