Concrete Castle - Comments

shit. this book sucked.

I'm terrible at commenting.
But that was...just wow, intense?
I don't even know, the ending was simply perfect!
And now the sequel?
Dammit, I'm ready for this roller coaster ride.
:D

fnsmnfbdmgns gnnr I hate you T_T
ffnsnbf garble
BUT OMG
THE ENDING WAS SO PERFECT
AND WONDERFUL ANDF FNDJNDNFN
SEQUEL TIIIIIMEEEEE

I GOT THE HARRY POTTER REFERENCE! :D Haha
I've missed this story! I love it!
great update! :)

UGH.
He needs to go after her right now.
Take her back and I don't know.
But please, update soon!

what the FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!!?
NOOOOOOO
jfbdnngndngnsngnsnng
I'm crying
I hope you're happy
T_T </3

XO!

sjdnsjfjakbeksnr No monohull
YOU CAN DO THIS
NOT NOW
PLEASE
IM SORRY HAVEN'T BEEN COMMENTING
I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO READ STORIES ON MIBBA FOR A WHILE
BUT OMG
PLEASE DONT DO THIS
T_T
in other news
I love how you names her dad Dirk
it sounds lime derp which sounds lime turd xD
hehe
He deserves it -_-

Le Gasp! XO!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE! :D

GAH! This gave me a heart attack!
I'm so on edge right now!
I'm glad she didn't just believe Garrett.
I hope she lets John explain!!

I'm gonna take a guess and say that Devon is going to be extremely pissed off with everyone when she finds out about the bet. I know I would be. Other than that, it's nice to know that they are actually falling for each other :) they are so cute and all that jazz. <3

WHAAAT!? :(
Are you telling me that Devon is going to find out and I have to wait another 4 months to find out if she and John actually get together? :(

Ohhh I can't wait until the next chapter when she talks to her dad!

DRAMA!!!!!!!!!! XD

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! NO NO NO NO NO WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY did you end it like thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat????????????????? I NEEEEEEEEED another update!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!! It's awesome how your characters grow and change, love love LOVE it!! :D

DRAMA is about to go down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

I fucking love this story.
It needed to be said.
It deserves a heap more comments.
Can not wait for mroe.
:)

I wonder why John's upset.
Maybe he's having second thoughts about the bet?
Update soon!!

Why do you keep doing this to me? You make them all cute one minute and then hate each other the next. SARA! Stop it.

JFDKKENRJNXNFFKNGNEKTNKSGNKDNV
NOOOOOOOOOOO
YOU CAN'T
THIS IS SO PERFECT
I DON'T THINK HE'S IN IT FOR THE BET ANY MORE
HOUGH IM A LITTLE BIT UNSURE
BUT
DHEMNMENG
GAH
BAYLEEEEEEEE
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU
FBFMDNMRDMGNFMNGTNNGKCNGJFDMNSKNFSNR
NONONONONONNONONON
GARBEAR!!!
SAVE HER
DONT LET HER GE HURT
DHTMSMRNNRJGFN
WHYYYYYYY
T_T
in other news
I love love LOVED this chapter!!!
teehee
they are so cute!!
<3
can't wait for the sequel