Concrete Castle - Comments

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<3 yes Yes YES

I don't remember if I commented on this yet buttttttttt I smell a kiss!
hahaha

Aw, go John! He's being so sweet and I'm glad Devon is starting to like him more, but then I'm not because he's going to break her heart:( Maybe, I mean I don't know it's your story! Haha
Update soon!!

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Aw, the only thing I hate is that I really want John to be genuine and not doing this for the bet, which I think he doesn't care about that anymore. Devon doesn't deserve to be hurt :(
Update soon! This is so great

<3
I love
this is perfect
but I'm so scared for her
I don't want John to hurt her

Great story! Love it so much!!

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John...
sigh
I can just see this all falling apart :(

WHOO.
an update!!!! :D

this really is probably one out of the three stories i actually take the time to comment on :).

Even though it's short I loved the update. And Sara, you already know I read Stars and I'm super excited for the sequel to come out. I want to know what happens to these characters. Just so you know, I plan on writing a chapter for Silent Voices Kill after work. We'll see if I get that accomplished or not.

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I'm scared
I'm afraid she's gonna find out about the bet
but I'm also happy that she said yes :DDDDDD

Omg i love this. update soon please.

As per usual, Sara, I love it. I hope you update soon. :]

mm, please update again!
and i think i'll be an active commenter for you, because this has grown into one of those stories that make me excited when i see you updated. (:

I've fallen in love with this story.
And I honestly just want John to break her heart already, I feed off of drama ;). Sounds bad, BUT it's the truth.

update again please?
and bytheway. i think this deserves more then 17 - now 18 - comments.

That was so mean what he thought! XO
I Freakn LOVE Criminal Minds
XD REID!

OH EM GEEEZ
CUDDLESESSIONNNNN
AAAAAAAAH
WHY SHE GOTTA HE SO MEAN
HE DIDN'T DP NOFIN
:(
EEEEEP
CUDDLESESSION:DDDDDDDDD