July 15th, 2011 at 07:47am
Concrete Castle - Comments
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If John's still in it for the bet I'm hitting when I see you >.< Not fair :(July 14th, 2011 at 08:27am
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Please.. Update..July 14th, 2011 at 12:04am
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I believe John still thinks he's in it for the bet, and he's convince himself that he is. But once Devon figures out, he's gonna realize what a mistake he's done.
and that he LOVES HER SO FUCKING MUCH.July 13th, 2011 at 06:21pm -
I love this, I'm subscribing :DJuly 6th, 2011 at 05:38pm
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Awwwwwe(:July 6th, 2011 at 05:41am
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The situation between John and Devin fits into the song Right Girl very well
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I love it
I know John is doing this for a bet
but I'm hopping he calls ot off soon a d he actually means what he's telling Devon
he he doesn't
dude
things are gone be horrible.:
please don't make anything bad happen
PLEASE I'm begging you T_TJuly 5th, 2011 at 07:11pm -
ok this is amazing.
I'm only at the like 5th chapter or so but are you making it so John does what was on her list for that chapter or is that only in a few?
If you're doing it on purpose that's brilliant!
You're fantastic, I love the story!July 5th, 2011 at 11:53am -
Update :]July 5th, 2011 at 09:39am
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Great chapter! Update soon,please :)July 2nd, 2011 at 11:32pm
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T_T
you ruined itJune 30th, 2011 at 07:52pm -
awww :]
UPDATE :]June 30th, 2011 at 04:44am -
<3
this is adorably heartbreaking
<3333333333June 28th, 2011 at 05:37pm -
Aw, she's going to be so crushed when she finds out it was a bet :(June 28th, 2011 at 10:32am
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ive got cavities from how fucking sweet that was...
you're killing me... <3
UPDATE! :)June 27th, 2011 at 11:45pm -
this chapter was sooooo sweeet and cute and all that fluffy stuff XD
UPDATE!June 25th, 2011 at 07:29am -
You wanted to get it up before you left...... hehe xD
I'm sorry
I tend to have an extremely dirty mind
hehe
but this chapter
it was absolutely PERFECT
I just adore John and Devon
<333333333333333333333333June 25th, 2011 at 03:50am -
Aww!
I like how she's opening up to him.
I wonder what the difference in her reflection was too
Great chapter! Update soon!!June 24th, 2011 at 08:08am -
UPDATE :]June 21st, 2011 at 07:20pm
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this story
this story will be the death of me
<3
and you using the lyrics from one of my favorite songs as the chapter titled
tha. just killed me
<3June 21st, 2011 at 05:53pm
I CANT WAIT FOR THE DRAMA!!! XD
UPDATE :]