Concrete Castle - Comments

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friends!

those are such sweet songs! <33
and the maine were amazing ! i was in the second row.... like 5 feet away from John.... i could melt in those eyes...

OMG <333 im seeing The Maine this fridayyy! <33333333333 i cant even fucking wait and this story got me more excited!

I love this story!
And I read that A/N about someone reporting you..and how you said to just tell you about grammar, and this isn't really about grammar..but like, um you're spelling Garrett's name wrong. :p I know its not that big a deal, but its just..you know...it needs two T's. (:
And like other than that you're writing is great!

lovely!!!

damn gurl
u gooo
and I know what u mean
someone reported me also
it's stupid
I mean
I'm freaking 12
not a pro Kay?
like seriously
though
I do use some text tlk in my author's notes
though it's not a lot
mostly jus for are and you
anywhoo
back to this amazing story
I love how their bonding
this is a side of them I actually like

Oh my gosh!!! Why haven't I seen this!!! I'm so glad I went on your page! I was thinking, about your story that I used to read and loved and how I hadn't been reading anything of yours lately so I came on here and BAM! I'm so happy!!!
I love this story so far! I really like how they fight and bicker. That's always funny ;) But I'm having a hard time picking out if John REALLY does care and act nice sometimes or is pretending to care and act nice for the bet! It's intreguing. Haha. And I love how Devon is so bipolar about her feelings for John. "oo he's hot" "I hate him" "I'm going to grind on him" "I'm disgusted by him" hehe. It's love ;)
But really, I'm really liking this and I hope you update it soon! Despite that douchebag who reported you. Like, what bad grammar could you really be reported for? I didn't notice anything that was bad! Goddamn people sometimes.
Ending on a happy note: Likin' the story, girl!

haha
Avail Lavign is pretty hot XD
I like her
I'm not like a huge fan
but she's amazing
oh MAH god
I feel so bad for Devon
JOHN
USE YER SWEET CHARM AND SEXINESS TAH SEDUCE HER
AND MAKE HER FEEL BETTERR

that was a pretty heavy chapter... :( hopefully it lightens up in the nxt one :)

holy shit!!!! where the hell did that come from!? that was a pretty epic chapter... wasnt expecting that at all.... @#$%^&*( that was awesome :)

OH
MY
GOD
I WAS NIT EXPECTING THAT
I THOUGHT IT WAS LIME
RAPE OR SOMETHING
OH FUCKING SHIT
XHDKSKXNEKSNEUXNAUSJHWSBSHSBSBSBZBXNSJSKWKKSJE
MY BRAIN HAS BEEN TURNED TO SMUSH

hehe
so fat
this is my fav chap
cute
I'm gone go listen to it now

oh how I love you Sara XD
nd oh how I love this story
John is just to cute

update soon. please? I really like the idea of the story :)

I love it
it's rly interesting
I think it's gonna be a hit