The Pretender - Comments

Wow, it's the ending already?!
I didn't see that coming!
Very sweet ending, though. I'll be waiting for the sequal. :D x

Aw, there really could not have been a sweeter ending.
I hope that all goes well for them in the future.

But in the meantime, I shall go and have a look at your new frerard

:arms:

cute ending

leaderoftheunwanted:

I liked it, but is that the end?

Nope, it's got a chapter or two left... I did put that in the authors note :XD

Thanks for reading and commenting =D :arms:

I liked it, but is that the end?

ooh i rly liked it
i started reading it and i couldnt stop! i loved it bunches!
i can't wait for the update. this story was so awesome!!
<3

Happy Happy Happy Happy Happy Happy Happy Happy HHappy Happy Happy!!!
:D

yay!

Jeez, when it said 'not guilty' I was like 'ahgnfjvcshfsrdnjkfdzsx .... b-b-but ... you can't do that!'

But then of course you made it all better =]

I loved the update, and I'm looking forwards to these new Frerards xD

Edit:: Page Claim!!!! I call it Diary Of Jane because I love that song =]

As long as you don't stop writing i don't mind what you write!
Loved the update it cheered me up after the crappy exam i had today which i most certainly failed!
can't wait to see the end of this ... but i'll be sad when it's over!
xxx

M451n:

that was adorable. and it was right. and at first when the jury didn't convict him of rape I was all like "Bitch say what?" then i read on and it was all like 'Oh my god YES!!!"

Me too! :cheese:
15 years bitch! That does feel good

that was adorable. and it was right. and at first when the jury didn't convict him of rape I was all like "Bitch say what?" then i read on and it was all like 'Oh my god YES!!!"

Noooo, IT CAN'T BE OVER SOON! omgno:
YOU'RE A HORRIBLE PERSON, BUFFY!
Only kidding. :cute:

But yes, please, Mikey / Michelle sequal!!
I can't believe you'd want to continue a character with my name. It's awesome! :D

Brilliant chapter, my darling. xxx

this is amazing. simply amazing. you has to do sequel.

YESSS!
THAT WAS PERFECT!
Seriously. I wouldn't of had it any other way.
He wasn't really guilty of attempted rape. I mean, he WAS... but not really. The other stuff was dead on, though. Nice verdict!
I'm very sad for the end, but a sequel would be fantastic. Mikey and Michelle is a fantastic story, and that'd be a great idea for one!!!!

LOVED IT! Really, be very proud of yourself =P

Love
Me

I must know what the verdict is! Please update soon. C:

WoW!!!!!!

IF HE GETS NOT GUILTY I WILL NEVER GIVE YOU SKITTLES!!!!

Joking, but I really think he should get Guilty coz hes a nasty old meanie.

If Frank doesn't win this case, I'm gonna write myself into the story and kill some people.

HEY, HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US WITH A CLIFFHANGER?!
I NEED to know the jury's verdict or I'll DIE.

You don't want me to die now... do you? :shifty

Well, even so, if I do, you'll lose a faithful reader / commenter, so THERE. :file:

Haha, love this (and you). More soon (ie, LESS than a month), please?
xxx

WOOOT WOOOT update update so sweet very sweet indeed...... but WHY :don: ??!? why the cliffhanger after all the waiting *sad face*
Meh an update is still better than anything so I'm not complaining too much
update *Does happy update dace*
Loved the Gerard moment too .... lucky he had a nice judge because most judges don't have much patience and are all grumpy buggers and would have held he in contempt of court without thinking twice about it! okkkkkkeeeee i shall stop rambling now!
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!
xxx