How to Date Alexis Brighten - Comments

  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I legit LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS CHAPTER I mean it is AMAZING and I like Flechter (i totally spelt that wrong sorry) but I still want her and Daniel but dude I LOVE worldclass because she is the only reason I found your kick ass story :)
    March 13th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • MarmaladeK.Gnome

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    *jaw drops* I LOVE THIS STORY!
    March 12th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • Twilight.Kisses

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    :O she can't swim? Oh hello there, daniel do us a favor please teacher her :).
    I liked your update. Get well soon!
    March 10th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • bob morley

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    This guitarist guy...so mysterious...
    I can't wait for the next update!
    March 10th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • LUmiNous dreAm.

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    Awesome story! ^_^
    It's really interesting...
    March 10th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    I need to know who this guitarist it. And soon. Is it Daniel?
    March 10th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    OOOh, that was a really great update. And oh dear, she's not going to do very well in swimming if she can't swim D: Poor thing. Intriguing guitar guy too ;)
    Thank you for updating even though you don't feel so good, I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say it's really appreciated :D We love your story <3
    xxxx
    March 9th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • Skylight Madness

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    So, I liked your use of details in the first chapter. It was very good, and you showed just how this girl is. I don't think I'm relatable to her in anyway though because I don't act like that and most of my friends like me haha. That sounded harsh. Anyway, I like how you've shown who she really despises, but I fear you might be going down the cliche way and having Daniel be the one to write the note and then they fall in love. I mean, you can work that with your writing talent, I'm just saying, try not to make it too predictable and you'll get a bunch of readers (:
    March 9th, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • Divide the Joy

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    I agree with pegiun that is exactly what's going to happen because her life sucks lol.
    The guitarist seems kinda creepy. But I still like him
    hope ya get better soon I'm sick too lol
    March 9th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • Sherri-O

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    Oh my god! This is my favorite chapter so far!!! This was great! I can't wait for your next update! :D
    March 9th, 2011 at 06:08pm
  • Heartbreakwarefare

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    GREAT story .
    March 9th, 2011 at 01:24pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    i loved it all!
    March 9th, 2011 at 01:13pm
  • PenguinATTACK

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    Im hoping daniels the one to help her learn to swim!
    March 9th, 2011 at 12:47pm
  • ImmaEnforcer

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    And you need like.. 100 comments more. I hope you get them soon. =]
    March 9th, 2011 at 08:43am
  • ImmaEnforcer

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    I hope you feel better soon! Being sick sucks. =\ This is one awesome story. It kept me up reading when I'm exhausted with school in a few hours-- not many stories can do that. I love Daniel, even if he's a pain in the butt. =]
    March 9th, 2011 at 08:42am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    LOVE you for posting although you don't feel well but dude I LOVE the chapter and I like the guitarist dude he is such a mystry its fun and the Daniel gosh she and him would actually be good together :P anyway LOVE IT and can't wait for your next update which will be Sunday unless I can't read... which is a possibilty
    March 9th, 2011 at 08:08am
  • worldclass

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    So...just wanted to say thank you soooo much for not postponing your update! I was sitting around trying to motivate myself to do math homework and then thought "OMG the Alexis story is updating today!" So...yeah. Thank you for updating!

    Oh, gosh. Not knowing how to swim! That's horrible for her! She really should talk to the teacher before class, otherwise she'll end up proving it to the whole class on accident. Though the teacher would probably announce it to the whole class anyway. *sigh* OH! What if she goes to tell the teacher that she can't swim, but Daniel walks in right then. ..so the teacher tells Daniel to privately tutor Alexis during class? muahahahahahahahaha :evilgrin: (Maybe that inspired something? Or maybe you already had an idea for the next chapter...lulz. that's just me spazzing out)

    Haha! Daniel and his stupid smirk! He very obviously has a thing for Alexis. :cueanotherevilgrin:

    Huh. Mysterious guitar boy seems to have it out for her? Or is she just overreacting? Hmm...very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens with him.

    Oh! And get well soon! Being sick is not fun :)
    March 9th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • ParentalAdvisory

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    I like blonde guitarist. I really do, but I have soft spot for Daniel and his jerkness. Hmm I feel really bad for her about the whole swimming thing. It would suck to have to tell the coach are whatever that you can't swim. I would hate to get crap for it. Hopefully Daniel decides to play nice about the whole thing. Anyway loving the updates :)
    March 9th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • Sherri-O

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    I really like this. Can't wait for an update! :)
    March 9th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • Twilight.Kisses

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    Love this! It's getting reay good! Can't wait too read more :D
    March 8th, 2011 at 06:27am