This story just keeps getting better and better. No, not the usual "Oh, look a transfer student!" routine. Instead its "budget cuts! merging unimportant P.E. classes!" Nicely done. Kudos to you!
Meanwhile, MYSTERIOUS BLONDE GUITARIST!!!! who I'm guessing is Daniel. Though he could be our second male lead... Aw, Daniel and Alexis. So much UST going on between those two. *sigh* I can't WAIT for Wednesday!!!!
I just started reading but I LOVE IT!!! the first couple chapters I read I'm not gonna lie I wasn't the biggest fan of but the more chapters you read the better it is LOVE IT
Just like most people I knida really ♥ Daniel. I think her biggest problem is number seven she over thinks things. She's not being judgmental by saying the girl has pretty freckles that she covers up with too much makeup. Judgmental would be more like "man she has no self worth no wonder why she wears all that makeup." And it isn't arrogant of her to be proud of getting an answer right from a hard teacher.
I like those songs I wonder who he is? I wonder why she hasn't considered Daniel to be the writer of the list he has a couple of possible motives, although I doubt he wrote it.
:] I really really love this story - sorry for being a silent reader, I'll stop that now. Honestly, I just want to know all of the secrets. Like who was the guitarist? Who wrote the list? It's very intriguing.
Liked it, as usual. A couple things bugged me a little this time. The first would be the fact that she doesn't think he looks familiar until later when she's thinking about him. Okay, that sounded odd. So she sees the guy and she just stares at him for a long time. And then, at the end of the show she's talking to the lead singer and then she's like "by the way, he looked familiar." It would make more sense if she realized that she recognized him when she saw him, not later. The second would be the ending. I felt it was a little harpy (is that the word?), repetitive in the way. We know the list bothers her, and I think bringing it up again is a little...redundant? Not too bad, now that I've reread it, but personally when I was reading, I just skipped the last couple paragraphs thinking "yes, I know this." Reminding the readers about these kinds of things is good, but make sure not to do it too often.
I adore Daniel idk why I just do! Hahah I want to read more! You got me hooked on this story like a druggie is on drugs! Soooo update as soon as you can cause I CAN'T wait. :D