How to Date Alexis Brighten - Comments

Title

Well, it is a little strange to me, but not too far out there. Lol

Summary

I like how you stated things so clearly, but still gave it a very mysterious way. I wonder, too, who wrote things about dear Alexis. Hmmm… XD

Chapter 1

This right here had me interested throughout the whole chapter. I couldn’t tear my eyes away, especially when the list came in. I love how things started off, what with her practically hating Daniel’s guts(Of course, he is my main suspect, as of so far).

Note

I’m going to save this to my favorites for I’m being called to clean… =(

Amazing.
I had no idea about the whole Isaac thing.
Great way of comparing her to Hamlet, because they are quite compatible.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

:) this story has caught my intrigue (I reallly reaallly hope I worded that correctly lol) and i can't wait for more!! This story seems to be unique, with the list and all. hope to see updates soon :)
lots of love,
erin gracie

I really like the whole idea of this, it's cute and unique
on top of that, the layout is cute <3 :)
I like how it started off with her being with her friends
usually stories start with something depressing, you know?
I like how she is labeled the school bitch,
because most stories the bitch is after the "helpless" main character
ahh amen to that, boys are seriously idiots
one word = oh, you must want sex with me
I also like how she does have a few flaws, but not so many that makes her depressing
it shows she has weaknesses, but not so much that she wallows in it
I like Daniel no matter how much Alexis hates him
he seems just like a fun guy, even if he is annoying x)
I love the list! I have a feeling it might be Daniel's...
I don't know, but I'd like to know soon! haha
I really liked this, it was not at all cliche,
and just a genuinly good first chapter ,great job :D

I actually really like this! i can't wait to read more

Nice second chapter!
I normally don't read the high school fiction genres because most people can't pull it off, despite being a high schooler themselves.

But I feel that you are writing this story with the right realism so far that not only are you pulling it off, but you literally pull the readers in and sit them right into the main character's shoes.

How you portrayed her through her actions and words, and also her personal thoughts and feelings was perfectly done, and it reminds me as a reader that even the most seemingly perfect person has their own imperfections and insecurity.

I like it so far! And that's a lot; I am a very picky reader. XD

Keep up the great work!

I like it.
Well-written, and that is number one on my list of stories to read;)
I love it and can't wait for update 3:)

Very well-written and exciting. I hope you continue! I can't wait to find out who wrote that about her. Whoever did is a clutz.

The layout us gorgeous. And the summary is pretty good too. I read the first chapter and I am hooked. Pleas update soon.

This is great!

Your characterisation is fantastic. Alexis is a really relatable narrator, and her voice is pleasent, but interesting to read. Seeing things from her point of view is intriguing and you seemed to fill her character wholeheartedly; you were consistent with your voice and tone and I found her generally an awesome person to read about.

I'm not sure why, but I sensed a kind of Mean Girls inspiration/influence in this. It might just be me, but it was great to read!

So far, it's a really interesting, original idea, and the end of the first chapter really leaves me wanting to read on!

The layout is really pretty. (:
I like how you start this off, just a typical day at school.
I had to pretend I cared - I think we all can relate to that. ;)
So far, I love her personality! It's so... uncaring. :D
I noticed that Daniel didn’t bother to help me at all - Typical boys.
I like how she describes her anger for Daniel.
Ohhhh, I'm curious to know who wrote the list! Maybe it was Daniel? ;D
Great story so far! I'm definitiely subbing. I liked it (:

I like this idea and it's quite original and I think the banner is real nice. For me maybe this chapter could be a bit shorter, but that's just me. I think at some parts it kind of drags out a bit. It's very well written and keep at it, it's an interesting story so far. :D

When trying to sum up the gorgeous layout in one word, two came to mind: adorably cute, hehe. (: <33
You can just tell that this will quite possibly be cutsey and sweet - both the title and the layout give it away. :) <33

The summary makes the story seem very, very unique. I'm incredibly interested because I want to know, too, just who would take time out of their life to critique the lifestyle and or attitude of one young girl? Only someone whom is interested in that young girl, and I'm a die hard romantic so I'd love to meet this mister who. <33 (:

I like how detailed the first chapter was. It was nice and I feel we really got to know the main character, Alexis, in an indirect manner which is incredibly more preffered than a direct one. Your writing style is lovely and this idea? One hundred precent seemingly unique. I'd really love to read more of this. :) <33

Wow, I really liked this a lot. :]
You wrote the story very well, and really got into the character, which is always a key concept; keep developing!
This was really interesting, and a brilliant idea.
I've subscribed.
Update soon!

Huh...I just stumbled onto this story, and I find it to be very intriguing.
Very original idea so far; I like the idea. It's definitely refreshing to read something new once in a while. =)

It's a good start, and has such potential. Keep it up! =D