Issues - Comments

Woah...so awesome! But dont kill nathan off! Haha, love it!

I'm thinking that she is just as lost as she is paranoide.. or maybe it's nathan playing a prank.. or maybe there really is a psycho killer with an ax out there.. anyways, I'm hoping that since I have commented that you will update again soon! =) (even though that might ruin the chance.. damn me! xD )

i just commented! now you need to upload! i want to know what's going to happen!!!

i wanna know what happened to him.

o my fukin GOD! that was frekin amasing!!! :D cant wait to read the rest. keep uploading >:D

awk nathan better not be dead. if you killed him i wont be pleased, i like him :( update soon please!

holy sheet! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENES

Yessss! Been waiting forever for you to update. But I understand that you have other things to do. Anyway, I reall hope Nathan is not dead. He's too sweet for that. I'm also really excited for Jacob. ;)

Plz dont kill Natthan!!! Loved the update =)

DON'T KILL NATHAN. I LOOOOOVE HIM. I WISH THEY WERE DATING<3

love the update! i really like nathan so please don't kill him.
update soon please! [=

Don't kill Nathan!!!

I like Nathan.. he seems cool. I also really liked the thing about the beaches, I didn't know there were three.. and that they didn't have creative names for them - at all.. anyways, it's not crap, just thought it should be said =)

I trust you will bring back Jake when needed and that maybe, just maybe.. there'll be a bit more Liam in the story again..?? just a surgestion anyways.. I really like his character =)

anyways, I need more and hopefully it will come soon! =D

Please bring back JACOB!!!! I actually miss him and Delilah time...since you know it's a JACOB love story :)

P.S. Please bring Liam back!

"Something as big as a bear, but not a bear? What was this fuckery?"
OH. MY. GOSH. You are fucking hilarious! I love the details and the hilarity of this chapter, and I love how closely you are sticking to the Twilight facts and reality's facts. It makes all of this seem so much more realistic and it helps paint a clearer picture. I can't wait to see them adventuring in the next chapter! The reason I love all of your stories so much is that I love your voice. The way you write keeps me addicted to every single story you write. Have you written any original fiction? Because I really think you should complete and publish a novel. I know I would buy it(:
Anyways, stay inspirational and update your stories soon please!
Lots of love <3
Niki

I'm just sorry I haven't found this story sooner than now. From when I read the summary, I immediately thought this would be a great story; and I was right. The specific details you placed into each character makes me feel like I know each of them personally. Delilah is especially interesting with her complicated issues. Sometimes it's so detailed that even I get a little depressed from reading how she feels. I love how there are so many twists when Delilah first arrives in Forks and the event that happened with Bella really shocked me and made the story even more exciting. The emotions especially are brilliant. I can't wait for the next update, but take your time and I'm sorry for your loss. I wouldn't know what I'd do if I lost a friend. This story is great, I love it.

I'm glad Bella didn't die and I loved the sisterly bonding they had goin on. I'm also really glad things went so well with Jake.

I'm sorry to hear about your friend; I've never personally lost anyone close to me, but my little sister has, so I sorta know how that goes. All I can hope is that you have people to support you through this tough time.

Really enjoyed this chapter especially the Jake part!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

love the story!!