I Believe We're The Enemy - Comments

Alyssa (still not used to tmcallong you that) I wanted you to know that I still reread this story. I read it again when I'm upset and it makes me happy. Thank you. <3 xoxo Lexxi <33

lol not too be reminiscent of the last comment but hehe 37

STILL good!

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Aw this was a great story! I'm sad it's over but seriously I enjoyed this story probably the most out of all of the stories I've read on here so far. You're very talented.

The wedding was perfect! Everything ended good for everyone. I can't believe it's over though. It kinda feels weird, but in a good way(if that's possible). I'm so happy that there were no storms today so I could actually read the ending when everyone else did. Alyssa you are one hell of a writer!!

i
am
about
to
cry
sorta
<3
seriously tho.... this is so sad that its over... ok quiet corey, dont go there. but that last chapter was so beautiful. i loved the sexi paint that was amazing! i pictured them just like the album cover for three cheers except instead of blood it was paint and their faces were happy and gerard was a pelerojo AND ITS SUCH A GOD DAMN BEAUTIFUL PICTURE IN MY HEAD. i would draw it, if there wasnt the risk of my fucking up something so perfect.
so theres my rant about that.
wooooohooo! lets see how long i can ramble about ur story!
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......yessss. I DONT CARE HOW LONG YOU'VE BEEN READING THIS STORY, MOTHERFUCKERS, BUT I WAS HER FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE NOT SO BITTER END AND I HAVE WATCHED THIS STORY LIVE AND DIE AND TAKE OVER ALYSSAS LIFE AND THE RESULT WAS SOMETHING FUCKING BEAUTIFUL AND I KNOW SHE DOESNT ACKNOWLEDGE HOW IMMENSELY TALENTED SHE IS BECAUSE SHE IS AND I COULD ONLY DREAM OF BEING AS AWESOME AS HER.
also, the characters were kick-ass. coughROSEcough. lol no, im not that conceited. even tho ginny was a bella swan for a while she was fine in the end. and lariah and lisette are just amazing and of course our beloved mcr, the inspiration of this massive brainchild (and our lives pretty much) was so perfectly portrayed. aaaaaaaaaahlooove.
so there.
its done.
as of currently favorite story on mibba es FIN.
and alyssa, i love you :)

Beautiful wedding scene <3 I love my Gerard ^_^ And I love you, too, Lys! I'm so sad that it's done, but oh well. All good things must come to an end, right? =] It seems like all the stories about Killjoys that I'm reading are coming to an end =/ Aw... Oh well, I gotta work more on mine, anyway =]

xoxoxoxoxoxo
Last Inferno aka Shadow Dancer (my actual Killjoy name) aka Lexxi <3

its over :3 ive been here since like chapter 2 but I have been in and out of the hospital (which can suck it) (the hospital that is) (am I using too many of these?) yeah so great story and I'm sad it's done. lolol

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I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN! I HAVE SO MUCH EMOTION RIGHT NOW THAT I AM STUCK IN CAPS LOCK!
HOLYSHITHOLYSHITHOLYSHIT!!!
ROSE SHOULD HAVE KILLED JIMMY! IDK IF IT WOULD MAKE SENSE AND I PROLLY JUST WANA FEEL LIKE A BADASS BUT I WOULD SEVERELY ENJOY THAT!!!! BECAUSE HE WAS AS EVIL AS EVIL CAN BE!!! BADBADBDABDDDD!!! STRAIGHT TO HELL! BANG!'
FRANK
AND
WHATSERNAME.....
WAS THE BEST THING
I HAVE READ
IN A REALLY LONG-FOREVER!!!!!
IT WAS SOOOOOO PERFECT...........................IWANTAFRANKIENOW

HEHE WEDDING :) DIDNT SEE THAT COMING! (HA!)

CAPS LOCK IS REALLY OBNOXIOUS
IM GONNA GO TEXT YOU NOW

A wedding, a wedding, they're going to have a wedding!!- I just got finished watching Corpse Bride and that song is stuck in my head. This was an amazing chapter! I love that you organized it so we could read from all of their p.o.v's. Frank and Whatsername are finally together, Gerard and Lariah are getting married, Grace is okay, Mikey and Rose are still going strong, and all is right in the wonderful world of Ray and Ginny. All's well that ends well, I suppose. (=

I....can't even fathom how immense a chapter that was.

As a 'I don't like crying and rarely do it' person - I was practically weeping at Whatsername's POV. That was so beautiful, and tortured, and exciting, and...Oh.MiWord I'm crying right now as I type this.

I know you said you found it hard to organise and everything, but I'm SO FUCKING GLAD YOU DID. That has to be the single best chapter of any story I've ever read...EVER! And there's a wedding...? And Grace is safe and happy...? And Jimmy's dead (violent cunt-scum he is)...? And Frank loves Whatsername and their together now...? THIS STORY JUST MADE MY DAY! It's only 6am...and my day can't possibly ever get better. You are incredible Lys,

I can't pick one favourite line, because this whole thing is fantastic. The sunset description, and the whole of Whatsername and Ray's POV's were beyond amazing.

<3 <3 <3 xxx

I GOT PAGE CLAIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STICK THAT IN YOUR JUICE BOX AND SUCK IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Heehee ^_^ <3

"We have a wedding to plan." AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD I FUCKING LOVE YOU, LYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Now I REALLY can't wait for 41!!!!! ^_^

Awwwwww, Whatsername and Frankie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3

Jimmy deserves to fucking die, that asshole... He cut off Gee's finger =,[

<3 <3 <3 <3 You!!!!!

xoxoxoxo
Lexxi

Chapter 39 Favourite Line: 'She dives onto the floor to join the other three girls, while Mikey, Gerard, and I form a triangle on top of the table.' I have that image of them all playing in my head so strongly...I wish I could draw decently 'cause I reckon that would be one helluva piece of Killjoy artwork. SOMEONE ON THE COMMENT THREAD READ THIS AND DRAW IT PLEASE!!!

I really feel for Whatsername y'know. I mean, I've loved Ginny from the beginning, and that won't change; and the other girls are great too - but I totally adore the tragedy and discourse that Whatsername has gone through/goes through. To be surrounded by people that you don't trust, and it seems like everyone is just fine with the one person you DO trust being taken and held away from you; that's got to fucking hurt. I would very much like to take this opportunity to give her fictional character a big hug...but since she'd not like that - I'll give her an uber-powered machine laser gun and the power to never die or be injured so that she can go rescue Frank now...

Btw...Frank better be ok, or I'mma comin' after you-hooo!

I believe I owed you comment-love (now completed)...profile comment-love (currently underway), Spider story-love (reading it after I post this even though spiders massively creep me out), and an update for GMaRtB. I can say with the last one I'm still writing it...and it's annoying me, but I shall try and get that sorted out. Tell me if I owe you anything else - I'm not good with debt :P

xx <3

Chapter 38 Favourite Line: 'and he’s gazing at me with a look of utter confusion, as if I’ve turned into a giraffe or something.' - I laughed so hard. Seriously...I say stuff like that in real life, then laugh at myself like I've just created the world's greatest joke :P

I think filler-y stuff sometimes gets a bad rap, since it's often needed - and tbh, this doesn't read too much like pointless filler. I liked I liked I liked. I'm worried about what Whatsername was dreaming about though...DON'T HURT MY FRANK!!!!

I'm medically banned from giving blood, 'cause my body needs it and it doesn't always do it's job correctly as it is. It's one thing I can never crossed off my bucket list :/ Your description of fainting pretty much matches mine...only I tend to get like a minute of feeling like my head's been hanging upside down for a while first; and I don't have a cat nudging my nose after *cats are evil!*

Tis your birthday soon? WHEN! Also, WOOOPWOOOP for 16 subscribers...although this story deserves like a billion. I may have to do some Author's Note magic for you to draw people's attention to it!

Onto Chapter 39!!
xx <3

I have two favourite lines from Chapter 37, and they're both from near the end!

Favourite line 1: 'My body is contorted, pleased, exploding, as if everything has been stretched like tiny fraying rubber bands and it’s all reached its limit.' - that has to be one of the BEST sex-imagery/feeling simile's I've ever read. Seriously, how do you come up with this stuff?! :O *In awe of you*

Favourite line 2: 'Or just babbling, my gasping stream of consciousness coming out so fast that it only sounds like one enormous expression, one huge holy shit this is insane, one frenzied chunk of verbalized love.' - the holy shit this is insane I love...but 'verbalized love' is just two fantastic words put together that completely belong. *Again...more awe is happening*

That was a great sex-scene; and the whole getting drunk thing was great too - that they finally had a chance to be 'normal' and not just outlaws...that Gee is awake and it's a 'cause for celebration. I think chapter 37 may be one of my favourites from this whole story.

...and now I must continue my catching up with Chapter 38!
xx <3

P.S. I have aviators. I am now naming them Raviators after your Author's Note thing ^_^

your authors notes always makes me giggle AAH THERES A MOSQUITO ON MY BOOB nevermind. tmi.OMG DID I MAKE YOU SICK I AM SO SORRY MEEEEEH
i am quite sick. and when i am sick i get into cynical sassy sparkler heart corey AAAH NOW THE MOSQUITO IS ON MY LEG damn i need to kill that thing!
u already know bcuz i just txted you, but i do not like this chapter. but im super excited for 40. im actually getting butterflies :) but this chapter didnt hav enough mikey floof... i neeeeed mooooore....

i decided that i'm addicted to mikey.
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMIKEY
i had mike and ikes in my ice cream today <3

I do owe you, like big time ^_^

Not for a few DAYS??? Awwwww =[ Oh well, have fun!!!!!!

........ I know what the errand was, and it made me very, very happy X]

Love ya!
Lexxi

Oh, I meant to mention this: Luckily, the only clothing missing from this scene is Frank’s shit. That, I'm not sure if it was accidental or not, but that made me laugh my head off ^_^

O_O

......... That kiss scene made my day.

THANK YOU FOR CURING ME OF POSSIBLE BOREDNESS THAT WILL PROBABLY COME SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

....... Hurricane ^_^

RAWR I LOVE THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AT THE END OF THIS STORY AND ALL THIS FILLERNESS IS FOR A GOOD CAUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!! X]

This is getting long... (Ahahahahaha... Lys, you've made my mind even more perverted, you silly goose.) So, I'll just end it here with LEXXI LOVES YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!